Final Rating: 3.32. Finished 114 out of 151 entries.

336 views including the voting period.


Animator: Moses Saintfleur

Description: *Description*

Experience: 3 classes worth of experience

Time taken: 2 weeks


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Bruno de Coninck:

Not bad. But the poses are kind of confusing... I don't understand what is happening here...

Donald Marks:

I feel like the moving cameras took away from your animation. Maybe focus more on facial animation than the dramatic moving cameras next time?

Nikolas Diamant:

You should add a floor

Nathan Greensmith:

Good poses. A little bit hard to follow and not much of a narrative, but some fantastic camera angles.

Edward Chris Evjen:

Your staging is vague, remember that animation is story telling and not movement. Do not add a pose for the sake of the pose. It should come from the character and what he is thinking and feeling.

Carlos Guadarrama:

Your poses are nice, but it seems like everything happens at the same time, try offsetting some of your movements and polish that lipsynch and it could be a great addition to your demo reel :)

Ben Halstead:

The animation is not bad, but the camera cuts, camera movements, wipe transition, and letterboxing are super distracting and harmful. While it's definitely good to experiment with cinematography, sometimes less is more... one or two (or even zero) simple cuts would be enough.


Next time, go easy on the cuts and camera moves. Seems like you were more keen on showing off your editing skills than your animation skills in this case.

Kyra Toomey:

A good start on the animation though the camera moves are a bit odd (the cuts are ok for the first few).