Richard Clark:

I would shoot reference next time.

Shiladitto Gupto:

needs a lot of work buddy

Oscar Holyoake:

Julius17 here to wreck some scrubs

Bruno de Coninck:

Your animation is very slow and your poses don't seem very strong. Start by improving your key pose and, adding more breaking pose to add some speed contrast. Your work will improve a lot this way.

Nathan Greensmith:

Good scene, good poses, animation needs a tiny bit of refinement, lip sync seems a tiny bit out to me, but otherwise good work.

Kyra Toomey:

The extremely bright light is really distracting. The animation isn't bad, if you hit verbal beats in your acting a bit more it would really improve the acting.