by Jeanne Bigo
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Lipsync need to be more clear & syncto the audio
Sean O Boyle:
alot of the action is far away and hidden by stationary elements. it's good, just needs different angle/staging
Great reveal at the end lol
more hand/finger movements on the game controller would be nice, and the guy rubbing his neck gets really repetitive. Some rubbing is good for the setup, but having him pause, or change speed, etc. would help it from being too monotonous
Nice layout, but poses and lipsync needs a lot of work.
Mateus Di Mambro:
Great story, explaining why he's talking about a "bat-man".
Lovely movement in the left characters face.
Great setting for the animation.
Animator: Jeanne Bigo
Description: At night, two young men meet each other at a video game party. But one of them looks odd.
Experience: 1 year as student
Time taken: More than 20 days