Comments:
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Joshua:
Mouth movement definitely not finished. The Jaw is moving but there's little if no Lip movement.
While fingers do move they feel like they're glued together.
Ben Zingo:
having the background character closer to the camera, and changing the staging might have helped. I didn't even see the 2nd character at first because he's totally blocked by the hand at the start of the scene, and as a viewer I'm focused on the main guy up front.
I think you could also really push the mouth shapes during lipsync for more expression
Kiya Price:
Cool concept with the camera
Kfir Ben-Dov:
Good story! Love that handheld cam at the beginning and the batman shadow at the end. All it needs is smoothing out the graphs and taking better care of lipsync
Animator: Clémence A
Description: Two urbex explorers are filming a video in an abandonned building. One is tagging the wall, while the other is setting up the camera, while sharing an anecdote with his friend.
Experience: I'm a 4th year student in 3D animation !
Time taken: The entire month, as a duration. Not sure about the exact amount of hours, though.