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A Technological Affair.
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like it :) A real story
Really cute concept. I love the ending. I also really like the mouth shapes you have going on. Very nice work. Solid.
animation is good, also holy shit a good message too :)
Brillaint idea.....animation is also very nice for mobile character
Nice Style again, Lauren ! :)
Very nice! love the story and the motion of the characters
JONG H. GOH:
nice story, the ending seems quite educative, although I was probably expecting the phone device be more naughty at some point. BTW is this done by toonboom?
I saw your animatic of this shot! Nice animation and awesome drawings for lip sync technique!
Love it! : ) I was going to say the tablet doing a shaking of the finger would have been a nice touch, but after seeing it again, it did not need it. Excellent piece all around! : )
Silence too long? Otherwise it's a very fluid animation, love the designs also
Why! He should be the one who deletes the photos, not you, stupid SMART phone! haha, nice work!
Oh! Very Creative!
Your animation is really good I think. The enviroment could use a bit more work but since this contest is about chatacter animation mostly I believe you did well. The one thing I must say bothered me is that I had to pause at the phone to read what it says. You didnt give it enough time. And I suppose you changed intentionally the word nude to rude right?
Interesting idea. I wish the movement between keys was smoother.
good , nice idea
Animator: Lauren Elizabeth MacColl
Description: After receiving shocking news, a man considers a devious form of revenge. However, he gets some alternate advice from an unlikely source.
Experience: 4/ 5 years. 2.1 BA Honors degree.
Time taken: 2 weeks.