Comments:
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Marni:
Jumpy and needed to be finished - would've been awesome complete, though! Nice idea.
richard a.:
looks great!
Ben LaScala:
Love the context but the character is hard to make out, but the animation is well done.
Patrick Verlangieri:
really good work
the drawing is awesome, the character is cool and the movement is good
The only thing is that it feel's blocked, specially in the begining
Paula Decanini:
Feels like it hits on correct beats, especially at "make important decisions". Polish up the expression in the eyes so emotions read more clearly, but good job!
Adam Roades:
Would have loved to see this cleaned up! Nice gestures and timing!
C. J. Cow:
Great!! You should definitely finish this piece. i love it.
E. Ault:
This will look great once finished, smooth out the frozen keys!
Janzelle:
The animation is nice, and I like how the person waits for probably who he's listening to finish talking, but the wait is a little long and hard to understand when you watch it for the first time.
David D:
I really like the way you were headed with this. I'd like to see it when it's complete! Nice movement and the ciggy is a nice touch.
Sofia Pagen:
This is absolutely great! I think some polishing or darkening of the lines could have been used to greater show the animation; and while the first 5 or so 6 seconds add greatly to the entry, the time spent on it could've been used to do some of the incomplete frames that went with the audio. I also feel like eyes went a bit too wide and open at "guy" and gave an odd vibe because the enthusiasm in the audio didn't match with the face, so it was a bit too contrasting with the smile the character does at the end. However, I really love the "stair-like" movement the character does at "You should never make important decisions". It served as a way to give emphasis and imply sort of a break between those words. Great stuff!!!
Amartya Mukherji:
loved it.... There are few awesome 2D entries this month, so the competition is tough.
Reginald Crumpler:
Very artsy. I get it totally that this piece is suppose to operate like this. Beautiful work. : )
Yurika Nishi-Imai:
Nicely done!
Animator: Kevin Maier
Description: Martin McLain, a good-willed, experienced cop, gives a bit of advice to a young criminal called in for questioning.
Experience: 2 years (Student)
Time taken: 3 weeks (on and off)