Final Rating: 6.01. Finished 13 out of 61 entries.

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Animator: fang ze ran

Description: Two guys went to rob the place, and..

Experience: 6 years

Time taken: 6days


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Shaun Bartoo:

Very snappy timing, nice arcs. I don't totally buy some of the acting choices (for example the lunge forward with the sword doesn't feel clearly motivated), but in general you've got a nice level of polish. I think the lip sync and facial acting in general is a weak point in the shot, and an area you could focus on improving. Watch your eyelines and the pops in the mouth.

David Fliesen:

Try limiting your camera movements a bit more. It's a bit too jarring in my opinion and camera movements are too abrupt for us to fully take in the animation.