Comments:
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Isaiah Hoeninghaus:
If you cut out about half of the lizard character's key poses It would be improved by a lot. Choose a few and focus on those, and the timing would be stronger. I really like the air quotes pose, if you raised their right arm from their size it would open up the silhouette and make the pose even stronger.
Shaun Bartoo:
Really nice style, good acting. I dig this one
Wash:
The energy and expressions match the dialogue perfectly.
David Fliesen:
Pretty nice! I get a sense of the characters and feel like it's actually them saying the lines.
Animator: Athena
Description: Lavender and Naga find out that the local flower shop is absolutely a front
Medium- Blender's Grease Pencil
Still somewhat new to the program, likely going to try make a custom brush next time as the default chunkiness is a little inelegant here
Experience: Student, 2~ years
Time taken: 3-4 days, between housekeeping