Zoe Piel:

Good work but could use some more inbetweening

Scott:

Nice solid keys. Would have loved to see some more inbetweens to smooth this out.

Donald Marks:

Hah, that male character is hilarious. I would have liked to have seen the line work cleaned up a bit more, Maybe another subtle beat before "I sold it" would have improved the female's acting.

Johann Wong:

Hmm..bit too scribbly for me towards the end, but anyways.. The lady in the 2nd shot could use some body movement, subtle atleast. ( eg. Shoulder, arms). Lovely head & lipsync animation though, hoping this would finish a little more stronger. Keep it up! :)

Lea:

Around 182 it'd be nice to see an expression change on the guy and maybe having him look down at her hand.

Ignatius Wong:

awesome animation!