Johann Wong:

Looks really good, if the overall animation was a lil more tighter. Felt like some parts are jerky & stiff. Watch out for slight elbows , shoulder pops as well.

Erin Goddard:

I like the direction that this is going. watch out for the fingers colliding with the table, in a few spots it looks like the hands go right through the paper and the table. very nice facial animation.

Donald Marks:

Really great stuff. The lip sync and facial animation is kinda missing here. Polish that and you've got a strong piece.

Theodor Isaac Zecevic:

Her last line didn't look so convincing. To me, it is the mouth that has her looking like she has a faint smile.

Poppy Marlow:

You've animated her face brilliantly! :D