Alice Reeve:

Nice body language, but I think the guy with the menu is floating around too much.

Adrian Winchell:

I see where you're going with this, but there's a lot of work on the timing and arcs needed here; the carnivore's drifting like he's drunk or on a ship at sea.

Léo Miche:

The character is moving too much between your keyposes. Keep the "stay alive" animation more subtle.

Lucas Donaldson:

I like when he wacks the guy on the head. Maybe give more build up to the wack?

Robert Zhou:

Just an acting note, why does he look at the menu while he's thinking? Nice woork