Katherina:

yaaaassss

Eric Raffle:

nice choice of acting but what lost your points was not the storyline but your lacking of enough motion and overlapping and follow through, sometimes this can be achieved by recording yourself and using that as a guide.

Niklas Bergwall:

Try to get some more variation in the poses and push them a bit more. You should also try to hold som poses longer. Well done tho! :)

Adrian Winchell:

You've focused a lot on the arm animation here, there should be more done with the pose of the body, in concert with the arms to make it a whole-character pose.