Paul Davis:

Seemed a bit swimmy in the motions towards the end, Otherwise good.

Brad Regier:

i love his cartoony motion!
Maybe too much pointing at the picture, especially near the end.

Daniel Huertas:

i like it because it's a full body shot and you did a nice job, i would have changed a little the left hand movements to add more texture to the acting, also when he says "help him in some way" i would move a little bit the center of mass of the character cuz it seems that stops without overshooting the walk... great job!

Jesse Baumgartner:

Great stuff. Feels really natural. I would lose the take at the end, but that's just me. You're doing some good stuff with hands. I like it!

David Artura:

Great work!

Peter Segers:

Very solid work.
At 'you know' he turns away form us, maybe it would be better if he didn't do that.
Still a great animation, well done.

- Peter -

Ryan Hagen:

Would've been great if I could've gotten my update in on time. But i'm pretty happy with the direction this was going. Thanks to everyone on the forums for the fresh eyes and comments. It was most helpful.

Andy Anderson:

Really good work.

John Erickson:

Good poses. I like the silhouettes of the poses since he is set askew from our view. The pose for 'i thought' could probably be different. it looks as if he is pointing at the picture. maybe if he was more front on to the camera and his left arm was pointing more out than in toward the photo. I like the offsettin for the hands whe it hits that pose though. Overall very good and dynamic.

Charlotte Wilcock:

I love the hand gestures!

Josh Doohen:

Is that your lady in the picture he's holding??! haha. great animation man! poses and expression are smooth! very conisistent...hard to find stuff to pick on.

Marcos Borba Moreira:

superb

Pete Y:

bad acting desicions

nice movement though

Rene:

I'm just curious as to who's on the picture.

Eric Huang:

Nice work, ryan :).

Steve Clarke:

Nice character to this.I like the style and the gestures are smooth and fit really well.

diganta:

take mid short its good

kienwei80:

Acting is not bad. Good Job!!

Mitra Turani:

awww, I like the little dude, and i understand his pain :D

Aaron Clement:

I like the action on the sniff. Timing was good... Maybe break up the movements some more so not everything is happening in sync.

John Cruz:

That was a lot of fun to watch.

Tom Law:

this is really well done

Kyle Rockman:

Overall the performance is nice you have great holds and the motion is controlled. Probably the only thing i'd say is you really didn't use the full frame...there is a ton of space on the screen left side you didn't even use....also it feels unnatural for the character to turn sideways at the end. Keep up the hard work.

Yeray Díaz Díaz:

The poses are a little off from what the clip. Seems you rushed to clichéd poses, think about what he's saying.

The character seems to stop dead at times, not completely though, but it's something to watch out for.

Ciaran:

Good. The bit at the very end when he stands up is kinda confusing, it's like he's still talking even though the dialogue stops... because it's such a definite action. Good stuff though

Meaghan Arbital:

I love the expression, and the subtlety of movement.

Cole Higgins:

I dont feel that this character has a character. He moves nicely but I dont feel that he really captures a particular emoption. Who is this guy, what was he doing an hour before this animtion. Stuff like that I think would help.

Rajesh Gupta:

It need more facial expressions.

Nanda van Dijk:

i like his body lenguish, but the facial expressions could use some work i think... keep it up!!