About a Girl

Final Rating: 5.99. Finished: 17 out of 131 entries.
Previous Animation
Next Animation

Animator: Tyler Phillips

Description: A man doing his best to explain himself.

Experience: 4 years

Time taken: 2 Weeks or less

Comments:

(Commenting only available during the rating period)

HariNarayan:

nice & clean

Eleanor Dayton:

love it! acting feels very natural as does the lip sync...

Joseph K. Garrahan:

very cool. Nice and subtle.

Olivier Ladeuix:

good acting, good body mechanics, but i can't comment too much on the lip sync since it is a bit far, looks a bit off tough

Marcella Cappelletti:

Good poses !!!

Eric Poirier:

Great lip sync

Aaron Clement:

I sore this in the forums. Some really nice work in here. Would have liked to have seen more subtlety in there, though... just to break it up from the broad actions... overall good job!

Ann-Marie Denham:

Some really nice gestures in here. I like his end pose and expression as well.

John Erickson:

nice poses and timing. i like the way he looks around at 'ya know' has a bit of a rodney dangerfield quality. nice work

Josh Doohen:

good range of movement. not too much not too little. very stable and believable with audio!

kienwei80:

Well done!

Ritwik Nag:

Luv the expressions & acting!! A little (half) step while delivery might help....??

david arthur:

nice animation, i think the line of action could be more solid though

Harry G:

at the end "maybe you know" there's too much head rotation looking to the sides.

Gregory Naud:

Good acting. Maybe a bit too symertrical on some poses

Stuart Livingston:

Very good acting with such a simple model. Not much improvement I can comment on so I must say, excellent work

John:

great mouth sync and expressions. the poses are good but i think they could be pushed more.

Mariya Kalachova:

Wow really great!

Seth Taylor:

This is the most expresive use of this rig yet. Nice job!

Emmanuel Vergne:

i don't like the model but i think you did a pretty good job here.
There's a nice rythm, but the poses and the arcs seems always the same

Max Perelman:

Great job.

Wolfram Kampffmeyer:

nice movement, nice poses! Maybe next time try to find a funnier scene your character acts in.

Dan Dulberger:

Maybe hand with cup could've moved twisted alittle bit to make it more interesting. Who cares if he spills alittle. Also you pushed the head forward 3 times at a pretty even intervall. Not a big problem but it is abit annoying with repeating patterns. Other than that pretty good.

plu:

i like that one man.
but... i don t think you need to illustrate each single word with a different gesture.
try to work more with the face and let the body reflect what going on in the face and in his mind.
hope this make sense.

Paul Borawski Jr.:

Pretty decent animation, a little floaty in parts but decent overall. My biggest problem is he's moving too much and looks off to the side too much as well. I would like to see a simplified version of this.

selvaraj:

goog animation