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Daniel Huertas:
nice job!... i like the last part acting but check the left hand on the fingers they look stick together.. you should try to add some overlap and folow through on them..
HariNarayan:
nice job !!
Jack Daniels:
Lip sync looks off
David Artura:
Very nice work! I think you're really close with this one. The only thing that really stands out is that the lip sync seems soft, and the mouth shapes seem a bit weak. That could be a limitation of the rig though. Great job overall, nice posing and timing.
Tomas Ortiz:
Great Animation. I would have liked to see more enfassis on the face.
Rafi Ben Aharon:
well done :)
Alonso Soriano:
pretty good, just a little stiff in some poses
Tyler Phillips:
Really nice, subtle acting, and great animation.
Aaron Clement:
I sore this clip in the forums. Not bad... I'm not sure about the acting choice at the end... doesn't feel that strong... the fundamentals are pretty good.
Mike B:
great poses an d motion, the mouth needs to be toned down a bit
Eric Huang:
"Help 'im in some way" lip sync... the mouth is moving too much for my taste. Great job overall!
diganta:
take care of u r lypsyne
kienwei80:
Not bad. But the hands are a bit floating at the edge of the table.
W Jacob Gardner:
the lipsync is a bit stobe-like. hold the shapes for a couple frames more and push them during the holds.
Chris Welsby:
some very nice work! Only two things I would mention. there are a few strange mouth shapes, this may be the render tho. Also having the black top and black background gives the illusion of a head and hands with no body! Great work tho!
Michael Cawood:
Excellent work. It doesnt try to do too much and therefore gives us a very convincing performance. Its so tempting to throw everything youve got at your 11 second slot, but youve held back very nicely so that what youve done is top notch. Shame about the big distracting shiny forehead!
Mariya Kalachova:
Wow, really nice, really natural.
Ozgur Yildirim:
Good one.
Alexis St-Laurent:
The animation is pretty good. I just think the character is not as expressive as the voice is.
selvaraj:
very good animation .
vinay:
awesome. love ya timing and acting
Teju Aloysius:
looks cool ,the animation is good,about the details you tried in some .are cool man
Dan Dulberger:
Body moves very nicely, except how the hand stops abruptly right before "That if I could..." . The lips move too much and not smooth enough. The rest of the face could move more to seem more lifelike. A rig-issue perhaps but still shows in your animation.
John Cruz:
I really felt the emotion in this character. Keep up the good work.
Yeray Díaz Díaz:
Nice! Good acting choices, seems sincere and moves great. I'd suggest some contrast on the poses to add more interest but still congratulations on a great work!
Emmanuel Vergne:
we can't clearly read the silhouette
peter wassink:
lovely sensitive and subtle acting
boonyik:
great work! the way 'change for me' is handled is my favorite so far
Cole Higgins:
really beautiful. I feel like hes not really talking to a person. I know there is someone there in the room but I dont really feel it. I think its his eyes. put yourself in his head and see if hes looking at someone. Maybe put a fake head in front of him just to be sure. Good job.
Paul Borawski Jr.:
Love your choices in acting! Maybe the last pose could be slightly different but not sure what. THE only major problem I have with it is the lip sync seems very stiff and there isn't much movement in the cheeks when he talks.
Rajesh Gupta:
Flat face. try to give expressions.
Bob Dole:
He looks too happy.
G. Smith:
Good job but it just seems extremely weird hearing a guy's voice coming from a feminine character.









Animator: Patrick Chin
Description: Played it straight.
Experience: About 2 years in 3d.
Time taken: About 8 days