crazy in the coconuts

Final Rating: 4.79. Finished: 50 out of 131 entries.
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Animator: Nathan Jones

Description: Crazy lonely character having a one on one conversation about his frustration with his other mate (an inanimate coconut) on a deserted island.

Experience: 1.5 yrs industry

Time taken: 35 hrs (animation)

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Hernán Bruna:

Funny and very good animated, congratz

Haakon Gaarder:

I like your concept here! The animation is nice as well. I think it would have been better if he didn't point at that vodoo doll at the beginning, because it makes us think he is talking to it. Overall, nice job!

Joseph K. Garrahan:

I think you can work on those poses a bit more.

Matt Kenley:

wow crazy guy on an island, NICE

Aaron Clement:

I like the concept... but was hard to watch at times... you need shadows in there... felt flat. Felt wiggly with the animation and not natural... I like the last pose the best.

Ryan Magill:

gave ya an extra star just because you made me laugh. Great idea even though it wasn't tom hanks' voice it sure sounded like it though

Taber Dunipace:

A nice animation but very bland and emotionless. One of the principals is Exaggeration, and that's not just for use in cartoony scenes!

Eric Huang:

Awesome :)

Steve Clarke:

The animation seems a little stiff in places, but overall you can see the animator has talent. Just needs a bit of refining.

W Jacob Gardner:

extra points for a funny concept

david arthur:

love the idea, a little busy though, the hands are a bit distracting at times :)

John Erickson:

nice piece. i love the way he looks up at 'help him in some way'

David Artura:

There's some odd popping in the camLeft hand around 250 and in the camRight Elbow around 280.

Mariya Kalachova:

Good, but needs a bit of polishing. Very nice idea!
I think you need to rework the end pose though.. it's a bit unclear.

Nate Dorn:

funnyness .. stiff arms

jim Duffy:

Nice imaginative approach!

Ritwik Nag:

Castaway!!HAHA!! Nice concept....

Mat Thompson:

Like the help him pose! Cutting shots would have helped sell this piece a lot.

Paul Davis:

Cute concept, nice action. Great job.

Mike Courtney:

show weight when shifting from foot to foot

Yeray Díaz Díaz:

Nice set, I like the idea but it's staged too far. You can barely see the character or the expression on his face. You've got nice moves, but you need to take away some noise, specially in the hands.

Andrew Linke:

creative spin on castaway funny.