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Shannon Daniell-Segilola:
The eyes don't seem to emote very much. If you could just put some emotion in the eyes or push whatever you already have further, especially the brows it would most certainly add to your piece.
Daniel Huertas:
check your tweening on your hand gestures.. also the top of the head seems too mushy and moves too much.. nice lipsync though
jim Duffy:
Nice nuances in the acting
David Meyers:
wow, really nice posing + weight shifting. Really great overlapping motion. nice job this month!
Josh Doohen:
Looks like you gave up on the last second or half a second. I'd cut it off sooner if your not going to animate the last frames.
Taber Dunipace:
VERY nice animation quality and acting. You've got a lot of twinning going on however int he arms and feet, which breaks the otherwise natural illusion of life in this scene. Make sure that you go through a long checklist at the end of your scene to check for this kind of thing.
A mighty fine job!
Eric Huang:
Nice :)
Aaron Clement:
Not too bad... he froze in places... the single hand gestures were good.
diganta:
its good make it more Exaggerate
James:
Nice acting :)
Steve Clarke:
Looks ok and well timed.But i think the character needs more of a boost of personality. Hes very ridged and a little un-natural in places.
Srikanth:
Need a little bit more exageration
Mike Courtney:
overlap the action of him coming down each time
Nanda van Dijk:
nice acting there, and i like the secondaire motion in the cap. i just think that the mouth moves a bit to snappie.









Animator: Ozgur Yildirim
Description: I thought...
Experience: Still learning.
Time taken: 4 days.