Daniel Huertas:

i liked the poses you have here.. i think the problem was that you couldn't find the rights inbetweens to break them down nicely.. i see some pops and unnatural hand poses that you might want to fix... nice effort!

myung lee:

I thought - the audio sounds more desperate whereas yours is more sarcastic.
you could tone down the wrist on 125.
the fingers gesture on 278 is awesome! nice job

Joseph K. Garrahan:

too exagerated.

Andy van Straten:

verrrry nice. love the sweeping motion towards the end. and the head shake on 'thought'

John Erickson:

Great job. i love the suttle head movement during 'i thought' Good poses and timing

Eric Huang:

Poses are too twinned, break it up... other than that nice work :)

Mariya Kalachova:

Wow really nice. I think maybe the double pose on 'some way' is a bit overkill, LOVE the 'girl that he loves' pose, very nice! Overall really good poses.. I like it.

evan:

the begining sets me off, it should be as if he was talking before the movie starts, instead its as if hes waiting for the movie to start, good stuff though

Traci Plagmann:

Your mechanics are good and things are really well timed and thought out. Your gestures are really good but my main suggestion would be to not twin them to make it more interesting.

Bilal Ahmad:

nice effort

Alonso Soriano:

hands kind of flappy, big spacing, a little to uniform in style of movement also

kienwei80:

His hands are static in some part of the animation. Can make it more alive.

Lauren Andersson:

i really like the eyes, very expressive, great poses as well!

Tom Cho:

Excellent animation.

Gregory Naud:

Really like the "girl that he loves" part!

Jamie Giger:

I like the body movement and poses but the face and lip sync needs work.

David Artura:

I think you're trying to do too much with this shot, like you're trying to hit every beat of the dialogue. A clip this short needs only a few poses. Too many and it gets too confusing and the transitions become too hurried.

Aaron Clement:

Basic timing is good... the last expression works... To me it's just too cliche. Don't lock things off when they hit... add follow through... Better acting choices are needed for a more sincere performance... Bottom line... the ending worked for me.

John Cruz:

That was good.

David Bokser:

There's lots of twinning happening and the poses are fairly generic.

Henning Koczy:

Overacted a bit.

Yeray Díaz Díaz:

You're focusing to much on details, be sure to communicate and have a right contrast on your poses before you start adding shakes, little twists and such. Also the poses are way to overacted and seems the character breaks his wrists.

Lauren Wells:

I like your gesture on "I thought" but on frame 188 your screen L wrist feels a little broken

selvaraj:

goog animation

Roberto G:

needs more polish