Alfred tought that ...
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Kyle Rockman:
Overall the peice is nice except for the end...its feels a little floaty and or slow at the end. Nice hand gesture int he beginning with the fingers. Keep up the good work!!
Joseph K. Garrahan:
Good. Work on the transitions to get more vitality.
Tyler Phillips:
Nice subtle acting.
John Erickson:
Good job. I like the beginning with the suttle finger movement to empahsize 'Thought'. Could use a bit more head movement. seems stiff, especially at the end
Eric Huang:
A little floaty at the end... but good work overall :).
Aaron Clement:
Okay, it's getting there... too floaty overall... you need you use you imagination more... what makes this so different from every other entry that's in here?! Please show me something different.
diganta:
make it ligtle Exaggerate
kienwei80:
not bad. But feel like the animation slow down in the end.
Gregory Naud:
Maybe a bit floatty on some parts. Good job overall
Victor Wong:
Nice subtle expressions.
John Cruz:
that was good. I especially like it because the actions weren't over exaggerated.
Dan Dulberger:
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Henning Koczy:
Too few poses. Hit a few more, and stronger.
Mike Courtney:
lip sync needs work
Cole Higgins:
Nice, keep going. push the I thought pose more. I would like to see more emotion in that pose.
Jorge Rodiles:
I think the last movement off the left hand needs a little more refinement but its a great animation in general!









Animator: Peter Segers
Description: Alfred is talking to his friend
Experience: 4 years
Time taken: 4 a 5 days