"i thought"

Final Rating: 4.82. Finished: 50 out of 131 entries.
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Animator: kubilay kocaoglu

Description: it's hard to tell on telephone...

Experience: 1 1/2 years

Time taken: 3 days, 5 hours each day

Comments:

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Daniel Huertas:

nice lipsync.. you need to work more on the weight shifts and up and downs of the body while moving in that way... keep it up

Chris de Souza:

This one has some nice poses but you need to watch the wrists getting too stiff... Also some of your mouth shapes need some tightening up. The sides of his mouth seem to be pulled apart too far and it makes him seem like he can't close his mouth. But your timing is good!

David Alvarez:

I think it need more work on overlap and stroger poses. Anyway I think is not bad at all.

Matt Johnson:

Nice - seems really thought out. Watch your arcs, especially in his hand gestures. Couple of times the hand led instead of shoulder first. Keep it up!

Eric Huang:

Good Job :), no complaints here.

David Bokser:

The animation is very polished. I think the face could use a bit more emotion. He seems detached from the dialog

Aaron Clement:

It's good... a little bland with the walking to the left and then to the right... doesn't add a lot for me... could be more interesting with the acting... the mechanics looked good.

Aaron Jonas:

nice start

Ryan Magill:

movements are nice but the lip sync is off

W Jacob Gardner:

he doesn't even have a phone?
but seriously, a lot of times he hits a wall with his poses, get a bit of keep alive, push to a slightly more extreme pose over the hold

dinesh:

great acting and timing!! a bit slow, in terms of movement, but convincing! the facial animation is good fun! :o)

Patrick Chin:

Good job. Thing that I notice the most is that his spine is very stiff. Could do with a bit more flexibility. Also probably a good idea to give him an actual phone-like object. It took me a moment to realise why he was holding his ear. Well done.

Mariya Kalachova:

He seems a bit stiff. But otherwise very nice.

Yeray Díaz Díaz:

You've got some movements right but the idea is a little dull. Not very interesting poses either. Analyze the clip and work with it's energy.

Nanda van Dijk:

i think it looks nice, but your mouth is doing to little. espesialy at 'some way' youre mouth should be smaller. but your overall animation is good

francis leong:

Great effort, not too bad. Nice