Haakon Gaarder:

Very nice animation! I would put more emotion in the face though, and remember that the mouth goes quite narrow and thick lipped in words like 'thought' and 'loves'.
Nice and subtle body language!

Tyler Phillips:

Nice subtle acting.

John Erickson:

some good eye movement and hand poses.

Harry G:

Towards the end, the eyes just move with the head. Would have been better if the eyes showed a shift. The details given are really good.

Michael Vandenhoven:

I really like it, perhaps a little more on the eyebrows, but still great job

Yeray Díaz Díaz:

Not bad, you got some nice acting on some parts and nice motion. There are some problems, you simply mirrored the pose on "help him" and "this girl" got all the life out of it. Also the lipsync needs a lot of work. Some of the poses are late to the dialogue, try and hit the poses before the audio.

samy.oddjob@gmail.com:

your poses don't match with the voice, he is really expressive and not your poses !!!

Patrick Alessi:

the eyebrows need work!

James:

Really cool!
I guess maybe you could improve it by adding more subtle eyebrow movements.?

Eun Ki:

Good Job!!
What happened to your eyebrow at the end? kind of straight to me.. Same movement at the same time... lots of twinned gestures...need little offset at.... "this girl!.." "maybe you know.." etc.. Besides that, I like it!

Stuart Livingston:

The acting here seemed more simple, more honest, and actually more effective than a lot on here. Good effort, this one' sjust a bit simple and he repeats that one action with his hands out, plus he twins his actions just a bit

Seth Taylor:

The movement on 'you know' is right on!

Erick Rohn:

The motion is believable, but I wonder if you couldn't have made better acting choices. When he sits away from the table, he puts both hands to his left, then both hands to his right (almost mirror image of same pose), then goes back down to the bar. Add more variety to the poses and exaggerate them!

Aaron Clement:

Again, don't have everything happen at the same time... don't worry... a lot of other entries made exactly the same mistake... it's a polish thing I guess that people overlook.

The acting at the end was great... good job there.

selvaraj:

very goog animation