Things could change for Barry

Final Rating: 5.15. Finished: 34 out of 131 entries.
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Animator: Travis Ramsdale

Description: This is the first animation I've done with the character so I treated it like a test and tried to gi(...)

Experience: 3 or so years

Time taken: 3 or so days

Comments:

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John Erickson:

Good poses. I like the idea of the right hand fingering on the desk. The movement seems a bit mechanical as the arm moves over the desk. The hand and wrist should be doing the circling but in the animation the arm is doing the movement and the wrist is not moving at all which gives it a bit of a robotic,mechanical feel. Good job on the eye movement

Kyle Rockman:

i love you gesture at the end rubbing the table with the fingers...nice choice!!

Over all the movement is good and obviously the mouth movement is limited(as in just up and down) It gets a little chattery but thats normal for up and down only.
Also tone back the large broad movements of the hands....and you'll have a nice peice here.

David Artura:

Solid work! I'm sure the rig was a tad limiting as well. You seem to have gotten a lot out of it though.

I think the opening take is a bit too big. You do have some nice arcs and pretty solid timing and spacing. Great effort!

Marcos Borba Moreira:

good animation, but i miss some shapes on the lip sync to sell it! he is just opening and closing his mouth

kimleow:

oh nice stylish char :)
love how it end.. but there is a snap when he say i thought.

Aaron Clement:

I really like your character! Reminds me of Keith Lango's character... Nice simple staging and setting, too... was easy on the eyes... felt nice... The animation overall felt clunky... Just needs more polish.

kEViN:

Cool Character!!!

The animation is a little poppy. Maybe just needs some clean up on the splines

Steve Clarke:

Great character with a good style of movement for the most part. A little un-natural in places but can be easily worked out.

Yeray Díaz Díaz:

I like the character, the animation seems a bit jerky, linear? Anyway watch the arcs on the hands, the seem to move a bit randomly. Also try and hold some poses a bit more, so the animation reads a little clearer. Good job!

Patrick Chin:

Some nice poses and animation in there. I think it would help if his attention was focused on one thing or person (could be off screen).

Harry G:

Liked the style of animation

Ozgur Yildirim:

nice character :)

Tom Cho:

Love the table rub. Good job!

Gregory Naud:

I like the character and acting. It would help to smooth out the animation and the arcs on some parts to make it even better. Good job

Derek:

too much going on. keep it simple

Dan Dulberger:

Nice choice of poses imho.

Seth Taylor:

Love the finger on the table very cool

Pete Y:

BOO!!! you suck Tman!

vinay:

nice

Nate Dorn:

would like to see more emotion in the face

Andrew Stovesand:

I like your rig.

Giovanni:

I like the arms waving.

Cole Higgins:

Great set up, very carttonidh and whimsical. I like it but he does not feel heavy enough. Add about 20 pounds to that guys hips and I think hell move differently.

Johnathan Scoon:

I feel it was a problem with my player but it wasn't playing smoothly. But just from looking at the key poses I thought this was great!