Hernán Bruna:

Just dont get who is talking to hehe

Kyle Rockman:

Overall your control of the movement is good but your have way to much in the shot.,....your are doing whats called OVERANIMATING.....trim down your idea to a few simple poses like 4 or 5 and just hit those poses it will improve your animation from a 3star to a 5 or 6.

David Artura:

I would suggest toning it down. Remove a few of the poses. This is a short clip, too many poses can become too confusing to the viewer and can make for hurried transitions.

Ozgur Yildirim:

Nice one :)

Robert Sanchez:

I like the expression and the body language, it looks like it follows the audio a little slow at points but it's great!

David Bokser:

the poses look pretty good. I think it needs a bit more polish as some of the arcs break.

John Erickson:

nice job

Taber Dunipace:

Try to get the action across more simply with less little actions that distract from the main acting. Needs more attention given to the animation quality (timing and arcs).

Holly Buechel:

nice arm motions

Aaron Clement:

The ending was good... looks very similar to the rest acting wise, though.

Irfan Ahmed:

Decent one !

W Jacob Gardner:

cut your number of poses by 75%

andyM:

just too much for me. too many gestures. i'd prefer to see a strong pose sold well before jumping to another

Damian Isherwood:

remember.. the pelvis doesn't move in a complete linear fashion, use your arcs.

Nate Dorn:

i like the lighting in here, simple and adds tothe animatoin. Slightly over animated at parts, like in someway and the end. Other then that, pretty good job

Yeray Díaz Díaz:

You got yourself some nice poses, but you need to narrow them down. There's definately too much movement.

John Cruz:

This animation is good. But for some reason the poses just didn't seem to fit.

Wolfram Kampffmeyer:

all the gestures come a bit too late for the spoken text.

Ciaran:

Pretty good stuff. The problem with a character with such long, skinny limbs is that broad gestures mean parts of him (his hands especially) are covering big areas of the frame in very short spaces of time which gives a kind of strobing effect. There's a couple of poses that, to me, don't really express the dialogue; his pose at f24 is very casual and carefree and the same at f118.

francis leong:

Good Acting.