Brad Regier:

Really natural-looking acting! Maybe break up the twinning a little. Eyes at the beginning are lost:rotated too far screen left. Good work!

Haakon Gaarder:

You're very good with the hands touching the body!

Eleanor Dayton:

looking good! the wrist look a little loose...i think the mouth finishes too soon at "loves"...

keep it up!

Joseph K. Garrahan:

I think you can work on those poses a bit more.

Carlos Fins:

Try and break up that twinning by offset the arms a frame, and to just offset the pose on one so that it's not exact. Looking good, tho. Not crazy about that last pose with the hands on the side, tho.

Chris de Souza:

I really like this one. Very clear and expressive. He really has a life to him. Not too sure about that last pose though... also it looks like you hit an "ow" shape on the word "thought" around frame 22.

chrisbyk:

really nice one. I may be wrong but it seemed like the lip sync is a bit off in 1 or 2 places.

Patrick Alessi:

Too many poses... It would work alot better if you kept the
"Get him in some way... Get him this girl that he loves"
Part alot simpler!

And you hit every accent in the voice... Leave some space(poses) for the viewer too realax and read the importen poses... There is just too much movement.

Daryl Marples:

Very cool lip synch

Andy van Straten:

its alright... the lip synch seems a little off. and when he points into the air and drops his hands down they move at exactly the same speed. offset them. keep it up

Marcos Borba Moreira:

be careful with the eyes in the beginning. they are completely white

Taber Dunipace:

His acting seems really unnatural and he's doing too many weird small actions, which distract from the main acting poses. His face also registers no emotion.

Nice lip sync.

Adam Knight:

Very nice, I like the timing on this one and the holds.

Eric Huang:

Poses are too twinned, also break up your inbetweens with more overlap/follow through

Steve Clarke:

Not really sure what to say about this. The timing is all there but it lacks much character.Quite boring in the way its put across I think.The animator has talent with the gestures but needs work expressing drama etc in this.

Tony Rivera:

thats gr8 it had that innocent selfishness...

Michael Vandenhoven:

I like some of your acting ideas, but I feel that the lipsync could use some work

Josh Doohen:

interesting pose when he says....get him this girl. i like it!

diganta:

its good

Alonso Soriano:

gestures seem a little random, not super related to what he's talking/thinking

W Jacob Gardner:

you have some good gestures and some poses. But you could benefit from cutting down the NUMBER of poses and hold some of them longer. And work on your lipsync.

Tom Cho:

Good poses but the face doesn't seem very expressive.

Mitra Turani:

ahaaha, love the acting, reminds me of that crazy dude who made kill bill

Seth Taylor:

great work with the eyes

Freddy Burgos:

Great stuff! One thing is that he seems to twin for two with his hands a bit. Also when he points up a bit with his screen-left hand, it feels a bit stuck in space there. Great job though, keep up the awesome work!

Aaron Clement:

Poses feel very generic and symmetrical. Again your another every that has everything happening at the same time... over half the entries did this... so your not alone. Watch the twinning, also.

Gregory Naud:

Good job. Try to move the eyes quicker like in two or three frames.

Max Perelman:

Try to widen the mouth a bit more and only open the jaw (rot x) down a lot on the big vowels. Also, the eyes go a little too far screen left right at the beginning and we lose them in the shadows. Nice work tho'.

Andre de Villiers:

nice. The lipsync needs some tweaking - many of the shapes don't match the sound

Ciaran:

Nice work ..but the pointed fingers on "girl" catch my eye every time, it seems unnecessary to me.

Robert Tighe:

Nice work. A lot of the mouth shapes are wrong. Like on 'for me'.

The 'girl' frames around 141 are well done!

selvaraj:

very goog animation

Nanda van Dijk:

i like your animation, i just dont like the way he moves his hands. the beginning is good but than it just looks a bit strange. nevertheless nice job!!!

William Matthew Robertson:

LOVE the little smile after "...get him this girl that he loves."

Victor Wong:

Excellent pacing with the key poses.