Tamara van Zal:

I like the poses, especially when he gets on the floor. When he is walking it seems to me that there's too much turning in diff directions, it's a bit hectic for my eyes. Also don't forget about anticipations and followthroughs. (It was nice how the left arm flowed up and then down when he said "i'm this short")

Johnny Castuciano:

CrazY jump at the end

Jeroen Koffeman:

Your animation gets better toward the end. The beginning feels a bit stiff in comparison to the ending.

Caleb Drewel:

good, a bit over dramatic, and the end the jump is just to much.

chrisbyk:

Nice one, but it seems like your character is reacting with a small offset, making it a bit unnatural

Eileen Kearney:

There's some really nice overlapping action in the jump at the end, which makes the middle part of the animation ("short, fat...")feel too pose- to- pose for me. Good acting choices, but everything hits at the exact same time.

John Vassallo:

Jump in the camera at the end is very distracting, overall animation needs a little more focus. Hard to read the emotion.

Yem Xnake Yu:

when he say "thing",he feels a little lack of power

Aaron Clement:

Wow, really different take of the audio here. It was entertaining to watch. Again, watch that things don't all stop at the same time.

Rob:

Nice... I'm not really liking the pose he strikes to accent the word "fat"... it's a bit too nebulous, and doesn't seem to mean anything other than to be in a pose for that bit of dialogue... I'd like to see more progression of intensity in the poses as he works himself up as well. Each pose feels as strongly hit as the last here, which tends to make the shot feel emotionally even. The scoot back is interesting, but I'm not sure if something so cartoony works with the more naturalistic animation you've established up to that point. Very appealing, tho. Well done

Taber Dunipace:

Floaty "CGI" timing and inbetweens. Study the principals.

Zee Myers:

interesting! obviously lots of time and care. the middle aged pose is great but the short and fat poses don't really build. the end is good, maybe a little much, and it feels like it'd make more sense that he stares at the mirror during his jump then away. maybe he jumps and turns his head at the same time, instead of looking first, then jumping and looking away.

really nice!