Mariya Kalachova:

The brightness of the character's face made it hard to see any lip synch that you worked on. Could have zoomed in a bit to see your nice work in such a small resolution.

Andy van Straten:

have the camera closer so we can see all your good animation!

Frank Collazo:

acting needs improve

Niels Beekes:

Aie, if you had put the camera a bit closer I could see the acting more clearly! I like the robot by the way and the acting (for what the tiny resolution shows me) is quite nice

Rico Lim:

would move the camera closer to see your nice animation

Tal Hersko:

you got some good stuff going on there, but i can hardly see anything. why is the camera so far from the character through the whole animation. it's hard to read the poses with the current staging.
Also you got a lot of twinning there.

Caleb Drewel:

that camera angle is terrible. i cant even tell whats happening.... i mean i can but come on.

Charles Eubanks:

This looks like a really good performance, but I wish the camera were a little closer! Also, the pause between "short" and "fat" sounds like it was artificially shortened -- did you modify the sound file? Please be careful, because that is a disqualifying offense! Overall, good job!

Sunny Kharbanda:

You have plenty of empty space around the characters. Frame it a bit closer so we can see the character's performance better. Also I'm not sure what that prop in the back is. If you ran out of time you could eliminate it and move the camera even closer to the action.

Siva Kumar:

The camera distance makes it very hard to see the expressions.....

Aaron Clement:

I like it. A definite improvement to the version in the forums. Good job.

Cameron Huber:

haha I love the concept! and it's nicely executed however it's kind of hard to crit the animation when it's shot from so far away :P

Rob:

Nice, but the wide camera makes it difficult to see what's going on in both characters. Good wieght as the line's being said, and the body language of the listener is nice. I think pushing that last pose for the scream a bit more on the smaller character would make it visually stronger contrasted against the rest of the shot.

Johnny Castuciano:

thats a gooder

Thomas Giles:

hehe

Spencer Jones:

Why so far away

Andrew Linke:

i really like the acting but the camera position doesn't really highlight that, wish we could really appreciate the acting with a better camera angle.

Renn:

Exceptionally well animated, although the background and shadows was a bit confusing.

Extra star for the random orange robot!