Allier Zelaya:

Timing was great on the lipsync.

Brent Steinberg:

watch those nasty tangents. especially between his nose and the burger. you didn't overanimate, which is nice, and its easier to go broad than to taper back. as a framing issue, you're cutting off the belly and the bottom, and i was unaware that was sitting down the whole time, making the stool when he jumps suprising. pull the camera back a bit. the line of action stays upright throughout, so i think you could get stronger there as well.

Johnny Castuciano:

REally good! "short" needed something else though

Kamal Bhattacharjee:

Good job dude...........
in "middle age" give fast timing.

John Vassallo:

Seems like his attention should be focused in the direction of the burger at the end of the shot

Yeray Díaz Díaz:

Hey nice originality. I really like the first part, seems very sincere. He gets a little cliché towards the end.

Brad Regier:

Finally, a rig that actually looks the part! :)
"Middle-aged": his face could come down more, it's getting lost.
Good stuff,
bR

Taber Dunipace:

I know he's sitting, but he seems rooted to the spot. Shift his weight a bit and let it become a part of the acting to add emphasis.

Jeroen Koffeman:

WOw great expressions. But why is he having almost a smile on his face? Makes him a bit goofy at the beginning. As if he can't really express himself. I don't think that corresponds much to the tremendously exrpessive voice.