James Lane:

This is pretty good...the only suggestion I might have is to open up his poses a little bit, he seems a little too introverted throughout the piece.

Mariya Kalachova:

Really nice poses.

Andy van Straten:

this animation is really smooth. maybe have him moving round more for such an intense dialog clip...

Niels Beekes:

Nice acting! Subtle!
Animation seems to be a bit later then the sound though, I wonder what would happen if you would set off the sound for like 2 or 3 frames

Louis Ng:

I like the not too exaggerated poses, expecially the one after 'thing'. The pose at 'insecure', 'middle aged', I think , was held for too long though.

Johnny Castuciano:

nice subtle actions

Ritwik Nag:

Great acting.Making it slightly wilder and moving the character about a little could meke it "kikazzz"....i think

Cameron Huber:

This is a wicked animation! I loved the final shriek as he buries his head in his hands - that was a very well executed idea. The only thing that let it down for me is when he says - "insecure, middle aged..." - his movements just... stop :S

andrea:

love your facials! It would have been a stunning animation if you had made him do a step or two. This way he feels pinned to the spot where hes standing at. The first pose "adorable" is just too much, it doesn't fit in with the rest. Maybe it would help if you came closer with the camera, focusing on his upper body and face. Still, one of the best I've seen so far! I like it a lot, its worth polishing!

Paul Naas:

Very nice animation. If you'd done this animation with a fat character model, it would have been an 11

Charles Eubanks:

This is really solid work! You're hitting some great poses, and the motions fit with the dialog very well. I like the secondary motion and polish in the first 113 frames or so. Great work!

Yeray Díaz Díaz:

You need to push your poses more and get the performance right. You've got some nice moves and expressions but it lacks wider moves and contrast.

Aaron Clement:

I like the natural feel. I don't like the choice of colour, though. I feel like it needed more exaggeration for the ending. Great job on the natural feel all the same!

miles southan:

Good stuff. Your holds freeze too much though and it feels a little too pose to posey still. You gotta separate some of your actions throughout the body. The other big thing is that his feet are locked in place for 90% of the time which is never a good thing, especially with a high energy shot like this. Also, the fingers feel a bit stiff and the reaction at the end is a lot smaller than the read.

Rob:

NIce... I kinda feel like he should move around a bit, tho..his feet feel bolted to the floor. It also feels just a bit posey, hitting predetermined poses and then holding through them..perhaps creating a little business that can accent the poses but keep them more alive might help. Good weight and facial expressions, and some nice hand poses as well...Good job

Ralph Pacheco:

Between insecure and middle aged, it seems to go a bit too rigid for an instant, loosening it up just a little bit would make it flawless. otherwise, super awesome, the best yet. Nice secondary action.

Jeroen Koffeman:

I think the overall movement and the way he is standing is a bit to steady for the over-reacting desperate voice. Good effort tough.

Matt Kenley:

its simple, but works

M.Bell:

The pose and overall animation around where the character says "insecure middle aged" completely kills this. I know you were going from subtle, but make better use of the time you are given in a scene and don't have such a 'boring' pose held like that. It really ruins what you have. The emphasis on "Fat" and the animation around that area could’ve used a lot more love and finessing to create something more interesting than what is there. You’ve got a great rig and all the possibilities to be inventive and explore, no excuses.