MidWeight Crisis

Final Rating: 5.1. Finished: 31 out of 95 entries.
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Animator: David Webster

Description: Guilt from a life of fast food.

Experience: 3.5 years in the game industry

Time taken: 13 hours

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Luc Degardin:

I really like the beggining. Could simplify some gestures (go straight to the burger on "insecure" for example).

Josef Sy:

nice setup :)

Rico Lim:

look out for some tweening

Johnny Castuciano:

this is really good! good job

Sunny Kharbanda:

Cool stuff! The arms need more ease during transitions, especially in the first half.

Aaron Clement:

I did a talking burger as well... I like your ending better than mine. Some of the timing felt off at the begining... maybe better acting choices for the first half... nice burger.

Michael Vandenhoven:

Love the idea!

vinay:

amazing idea. awesome

Dan Dulberger:

I found the move between "short" and "fat" too fast. Otherwise pretty good.

Giuseppe:

Definitely the best idea until now !!! Maybe not snappy enough. I miss some moving holds and overlaps to get more fluidity. The hand on the head is probably to fast and not necessary. But overall not bad! I really like it!

Andrew Stovesand:

nice

Taber Dunipace:

Relying a bit too much on CG tricks. I like the poses but the timing and a bit stilted and boring. Keep studying the principals.

Spencer Jones:

Good stuff. Hand to head on F112 ish looked bit rushed

Adam Knight:

great work

Zee Myers:

funny!

Renn:

Nice idea with the burger! Fantastic wit and ingenuity! However, the animation of the character is quite staccato where it shouldn't be in my opinion. And his neck does something weird in there that doesn't quite read right...

Extra stars for the talking burger!

Rangesh:

Lip Sync Can Be Concentrated
Until now it ok
Work More on Lip Sync