Colleagues

Final Rating: 4.96. Finished: 32 out of 95 entries.
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Animator: peter wassink

Description: Two longtime colleagues, one of them has become indifferent to the other with his endless self pitying complaints, almost indifferent....

Experience: 6 days so far

Time taken: almost 10 years 'in the business' but only occasionally doing pure character animation

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Allier Zelaya:

Good facial expressions.

Dan:

Good job capturing this particular scene. The only thing are the missing pieces in certian frames, are distracting, otherwise great job!

Mariya Kalachova:

GREAT!!!

Frank Collazo:

more work in the body motion

Tim Kings-Lynne:

love the setup
nice simple pose holding of second character and cool expression when he turns to say 'i made you short?'

i hope you keep working on this one after the comp.

Louis Ng:

Hey it's cool. I like the animation all the way until the short guy jumped in the air and stayed there. Shouldnt he land?

Maybe the partner can have a certain response to the short guy someway through the tirade, because right now he seems disconnected. Just my 2 cents. Great job!

Johnny Castuciano:

2-D!

jonathan fontaine:

great characters !!

Kamal Bhattacharjee:

excellent work.....

i think you need some time to draw the IB.
carry on dude.... just complete the ib and Ink & paint.....
Its great....

jinu:

very nice

Tal Hersko:

got some good stuff there. i would use his stick more for the accents.
like hitting the floor with the stick while saying fat. or to make it even more comic by almost killing the other guy with the stick while hitting it (which would make more sense for him to say: "i'm guilty of this"?

anyway grate to see some 2d.

Charles Eubanks:

Good expression on the "I made you short?" line.

Jason Fugh:

11 stars: great psoes, times good, just finish the in-betweens and this will be a good piece

Aaron Clement:

Nice, I like the designs of the characters. Great expressions as well. I like it!

Paul Naas:

Love the setting and the characters!

Harry G:

really good... but a lot of in betweens missing. Looked more like blocking

Craig Perez:

Awesome 2d, nice simple clean design on the characters....like when the guy ducks his head behind the shield..nice work!

Yeray Díaz Díaz:

Hey, nice job! I like expressions and the characters, it does seem a little too jerky at times, but your poses look real nice. If you add some inbetweens to smooth it out it would be really cool.

Bader Badruddin:

its a nice attempt, but it doesnt make sense.

sharad kumar:

nice characters...i think u need to work on his leg movement!

Rob:

Not bad... the poses could be a bit more appealing and expressive, and I'm not feeling much weight in the shorter guard. I like the expressions on the face and the designs are cute enough.

andrew s:

nice.

Danny Young:

I love to see traditional animation once in a while! Good job!

Taber Dunipace:

Heh, middle-aged. I get it. Pretty good! I'd say it's just a little boring still but you've got a lot of fun stuff going on in here. Ends a bit early too.

Good job!

Thomas Giles:

you have a great style!

Stephan Hempel:

I like the facials. But stronger poses that relate more to the dialogue would make the performance more interesting.

Amy:

I like these guys. Still a bit choppy with your left knights movement (disregarding that he's missing limbs sometimes. I like his acting. Good use of the long FFffff on "fat"

Dave Blanchette:

Nice drawings and attitudes.

Adam Knight:

Nice work!