Allier Zelaya:

Great mirror and belly action. You might want to look into making the poses a little more interesting.

Brent Steinberg:

the mirror reacts much too fast, as there is no break for us to absorb the gag.

Caleb Drewel:

more acting

Frank Collazo:

interesting, more overlap action and curves

Tim Kings-Lynne:

i think its a nice idea!

too much time spent on stomach deformers? and not the weight of the characters movements. Tighten up the take and settle on the last action and watch the spacing of movements to sell his weight rather than directly touching and showing you his stomach fat?

cool idea!

Johnny Castuciano:

I like the subtle actions.

Kamal Bhattacharjee:

not nessery to fall down at last
good concept and timing
good job keep it up

Martin Jimenez:

Great idea.

John Vassallo:

Good effort, feels very floaty, lip sync needs work. Reaction and fall at the end needs work. Good idea though.

Sunny Kharbanda:

Good effort! I think the staging of the mirror reflection is weakening the animation, though.

Aaron Clement:

Nice... a much better ending to what you had in the forums! A little floaty around 'fat' point. I can tell you've put a lot of work into this... good job.

Yeray Díaz Díaz:

You need to push your poses more and get the performance right. Hold the poses more, the animation is quite floaty.

Taber Dunipace:

Some things are realistic and others are cartoony. Pick one and try to stick with it the whole time. A bit floaty in that "CGI" way. Work on timing. Study the principals.

M.Bell:

This is not a comment on your piece specifically, but it’s just funny how limited people were as far as ideas for this dialogue. I must’ve seen the same kind of cliché scene with the mirror image and the guy falling over about 6 or 7 times now.

Renn:

Fantastic dynamics of the secondary motion when he grabs his stomach. Very well done indeed.