Frank Collazo:

less motion in the arms to generi
very good in general

Ian John White:

Its all a bit posed with no smooth motions. All all too evenly paced. Good effort though

Niels Beekes:

I love how the skinny guy is acting. Generi might need some more expressions though, I mean, he is really really angry! Well, that's what he sounds like anyway.

jonathan fontaine:

best 2nd role !

Cameron Huber:

Not bad man. Some of the poses didn't flow through each other very well though. I mainly found this when he said "fat..." - that movement didn't feel right. I like the ending :)

Ben Hammersley:

would love to see more emphasis on the poses starting from fr 169. Nice composition though.

Yeray Díaz Díaz:

You need to push your poses more and get the performance right. Watch out for cliché poses that don't really fit the audio clip. You also need to reduce the number of poses and make the ones you keep meaningful.

Jeroen Koffeman:

frame 164: The caracter has either really strong thighs or his feet are being pulled up by some invisible force. The rest is good

Charles Eubanks:

This is very cute, and you've made some ambitious choices that paid off in the end! You use all the character's limbs effectively, especially with the kick and leg-cross. The lip sync could be tightened up a bit, especially in the first line. But overall, this is really good!

David Trudel:

I like the ending. Maybe some improvement to do on the lipsync. Good acting though.

Jason Fugh:

11 stars: great subtle gestures, excellent timing

Steve Clarke:

I think the blue guy moves around too much. I had the same problems with an earlier animation where it didnt hold the poses for long enough. Cute ending though:)

Aaron Clement:

Interesting ending. Felt natural for the most part. Good silhouette.

Johnny Castuciano:

decent

andrew s:

A really good effort.