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Aaron Clement:
I like the idea... just think it needs better execution. The timing is off and the poses are pretty weak. Watch the floatiness as well... Good effort at the end of the day.
Charles Eubanks:
This is a good performance from both characters. My one complaint is that some of the hand gestures feel a tiny bit mistimed (e.g. frame 112). You definitely have potential -- keep it up!
Daniel MC Alvite:
I like your acting choices
Yeray Díaz Díaz:
You need to push your poses more and get the performance right. Hold the poses more, the animation is quite floaty.
Mike Courtney:
a bit floaty, the accents in the actions could be a lot snappier
Émylie:
cute blue bonhomme,,... it would be better if his movements were less smoother, ..... like sharper example: when he puts his picture on the table,... make him look mad,... he should be slamming that picture frame instead of placing it gently on the table...
Jason Fugh:
5 stars: pacing needs work
Johnny Castuciano:
great
Danny Young:
I think it's just a little floaty and maybe needs more emphasis on the key poses. The word "fat" and the scream is just a little too lackluster for my taste. Good though!
Taber Dunipace:
Floaty timing and poor poses contribute to the "CGI" effect of having bland motion. Keep studying the principals.
Spencer Jones:
F141 the arm moves bit slow kinda like he was almost bowing rather than expressing the disgust of his fat figure, could have been a faster harsher hand movment like he was almost stabbing at something. I think just the timing of movements could help out. F151 - F193 follow his left hand... I think it could have just curved up then down once rather than twice. but i could be wrong and thought was pretty good animation.









Animator: Gabor Kiss
Description: It's my first 3D animation with lipsync. I wanted to polish this scene more, but...
Experience: 15 years traditional, I still learn 3D
Time taken: 5 days