Tim Lobes:

Movements are good. Great start, I really want to see a finished version of this.

Allier Zelaya:

For an unfinished piece it looks good. Would have really liked to see the end product. One thing you might want to consider is making the camera movement at the end faster in order to see the the second character in screen longer.

Andy van Straten:

this had potential! no lipsync :(

Rico Lim:

nice but half way there

Aaron Clement:

Good, but a little emotionless... It needs more emotional expressions... Not sure why the furniture is in wireframe.

Johnny Castuciano:

Not too shabby, it would have been nice to see some lip sync though

Kamal Bhattacharjee:

Good job dude...........

Jeroen Koffeman:

nice, i aspecially like the leg movement at frame 128. At 'Fat' i don't really get the feeling he touches his belly, because his hands are to still. Make the hands take the impact of the collision with the belly. I don't see much lyp movement.

Yeray Díaz Díaz:

You've got some nice posing, a tad cliché but communicate nice. Didn't understand the suitcase drop, you could have skipped it doesn't add to the animation at all. Too bad there's no lip sync, it would've really added to the piece.

Rob:

Nice body attitudes and wiehgt...I wish you had gotten to the facial animation so we could see the lip sync... I have a feeling this would have been one of the best with it.

Nice job

Dave:

the body acting is pretty good here. I wish you could've finished the face.

Taber Dunipace:

A nice rough but I'll have to score lower for incompleteness. I love the characters but it all seems really stiff and rough right now.

Spencer Jones:

This one was very cool. Not sure the way he is holding himself on F43 is physically possible, think you pushed that a lil too much. You shouldnt have had him looking at the other guys so earlier though I reckon @ F126ish. I really liked from F230-End. It was so good I didnt even realize there was no Lipsync til second time around...Lazy! lol Should have had his mustache deforming/moving just a bit, that would have worked. Very good overall.

Dave Blanchette:

Nice walk, then deflate, on "..insecure, middle-aged thing!"

Guillaume:

i think it might be a question of intention, the speaking character seems to be doing more a mild monologue rather than adressing the other character(that can be revealed like you do at the end of the animation)in a dramatic way. Don't forget who you want the speaking character to talk to, the other character?or the camera?(audience) Nice posing, many of your keys could benefit from extremes. Good effort. In the right direction.

Frank G:

Nice acting. I like the foot shuffle on; "look at me". I really wonder what gesture suits "middle aged" best. I think the animators that used a mirror achieved it best. In this well acted piece it's a conter point to the forlorn "thing" gesture.

Renn:

A solid and well executed animation, apart from the obvious lack of character's ability to talk. Potentially well done, but really needs that lip sync.