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Animator: Madan

Description: Two persons talking in beach. First person start to talking and slowly he saw the ginrls in bikini and his spelling go's wrong.seconds persons get up and ask what you spells beside boy currect tha spelling.

Experience: one year

Time taken: 2 week

Comments:

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Santiago Montenegro:

jeje funny

Caryn:

The acting doesn't work for me.

Noah Arntson:

Could use some extra tweening and overlap but I like your locale and character choices.

Nate Lane:

cool man its looking awesome! One thing that I think is a little off is that the 2 guys sitting in the chairs get all surprised by the kid correcting them before he even speaks. Usually you want a couple of frames inbetween an action and reaction... it gives the character the illusion of thought before the reaction. Anyways, keep it up! You've done awesome!

Vanessa Blair:

I don't really understand the girls are walking by, and why the second guy reacts so angrily at the first. And then the video cuts off.

Janarthanan:

Good work...nice idea..
almost all characters have lot of symetrical poses and actions....
head,body..hand all have same timings..
The bald guy lifts up. with out any weight..could have workd on him a bit..
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Girls look cool..both their walk..has the ame style..cold have varried..

Rajesh gnair:

Great effort....man

Baba:

Good Concept

vivek:

need to improve a lot ,the total animtion is very slow , make a fine tune in action and liping

Mayank:

HAHAHAHA nice concept..just try to break the symmetric of the hand...nice concept

Akif Kucet:

I couldn't heard the end of the dilaogue.

Mike Courtney:

keep pushing it

Jason Smith:

Nice beach scene!! One thing that caught my eye: watch the twinning on when the character stands up. It looks too mechanical.

Andy Bewernick:

You modified the sound clips, it didn't work to well. I liked the character on the far left, the others could have used more work.

Ben Hatton:

Interesting angle, but not taken to full advantage. The two guys start to react to the boy even before he's said anything.

Sean Graham:

Things feel still very linear and unrefined. The lipsynch feels pretty far off in spots. I like the idea, and this one has some nice opportunities to work on some good fundamental things body mechanics-wise.

Ramesh Koruturu:

ok nice but that last packageman and 2nd character b o d i e s dailoge before responding

Ashwani:

ur video & voice not proper may its rendering problem. animation get faster in the end

Ben Harper:

I like the idea of the women passing by. It suits the audio really well. Couple of things I noticed. The two central characters react too soon to the guy saying B-O-D-I-E-S. and the guy wearing the cowboy hat, his right leg goes inside the chair at the end. good effort though.

Nathan Jent:

nice twist on the dialog