Nicholas Palmer Kelly:

i like what you've got going....the lip sink is a bit off....it also seems a little stiff and snappy in places...you might resort to secondary animation more on the SL character while SR's delivering his line to keep attention on him....and i think the hand on SL is a bit much from 282-303ish....maybe a different pose/jester....think you did an awesome job on the kid though as far as animation goes...nice job

sharad kumar:

the kid is sooooooooooo cute!

Andrew:

little more leg movement would be nice. upper body looks great, lower half looks a little static

Noah Arntson:

Very cool.

Nate Lane:

haha I'm loving it man. I really like that little head rub and smile at the end. awesome stuff. Also like the whole story idea. Well done.

Eric Huelin:

Quiet *points to the kid* I don't get it.

vivek:

nise foks its good

Janarthanan:

Great work..good idea...nice composition ..

chakravarma:

might be u win the competition .

Mayank:

Great work..concept is good..animation is also good..i like the small character..Good Luck

Mike Courtney:

good work

Guneet:

Geat job.

Andy Bewernick:

Very good, especially colors and lighting.

zach rahman:

very good i loved the concept and the secondary action.

Ben Hatton:

I like how you made guy1 move in along the log a bit, but there's something wrong, I think the way he leads with his chest - wouldn't you kind of slide, leading with the pelvis? Or maybe I'm just weirded out by naked log straddling. The waves don't work for me - they're a bit too randomly placed.

Sean Graham:

A little more polish, and I think this one is really, really cool. Love the idea and the acting beyond the dialog. You really found ways to broaden the scene potential beyond the sound clip.

yoozco:

in my opinion there is incostistency of "father" behaviour. but overalll good animation

Ashwani:

good job nice animation

James Fearn-Wannan:

I like your characterization. And the blowing syncing up with the wind was a nice touch.

Juan Carlos Valdez:

some of the animation was floaty but good overall

SamoRa G:

thats cool!!

David Shum:

Nice stuff.
I"m just a little confused as to why the "dad" (screen left guy) is proud of his son, but where just a moment ago, he's trying to avoid having the kid hear their conversation....
Do I make sense?
Animation is awesome tho :D

Ramesh Koruturu:

good nice

Erik Westlund:

Nice alternative idea for audio avoiding the obvious. You setup the second adult character as very concerned for the child's innocence. Then you show him, shift to a preoccupation with accuracy of information, and lastly proud of his son's worldliness. Confusing. Good demonstration of weight with hand on head.

ajay singh:

nice work

logu:

i like concept and animation is the very good.