kemal kemal:

I like the 1st and third guy, I think you pushed the 2nd guy a little too much.

Marco Palmieri:

well animated. idea is not clear. where are the bodies? the actions seem to be a bit overly flowy and soft. could be snappier. good job though.

Nicholas Palmer Kelly:

to me some of poses seem pushed to much...mechanics and timing are good on the toss up and catch....cool

Andrew:

nice work. the ball toss is a nice little addition and your arcs are working well.

Dian Anggraini:

Very fluid animation, I like it. One thing though, instead of him throwing the ball, why don't you make him stunned and dropped the ball, I think it would be more interesting.

Ryan Chan:

animation looks great! One thing i would say is the ball is moving a tad too fast i think. I feel like it should be floating more. Otherwise, i like it a lot.

Eric:

Very good. There is a little flash frame at frame 222.

Nate Lane:

awesome man. I really love the little ball throw of the 2nd guy. Keep it up!

Ramesh Koruturu:

animation is good

Nomercy:

good work but could have given some more time for the expressions..

Ashwani:

good work keep it up

Shannon:

The animation is very well done, but I find that some of your acting choices and your camera set up are distracting, especially the second adult playing with the yellow ball.

Mike Courtney:

nice work

Andy Bewernick:

Excellent! The ball toss and catch is excellent!

zach rahman:

wonderful, love the action in between the dialog

Joan Delmont:

I like the intentions, but the animation have some problems...

Michael Twentyman:

eh some of the flourished movement feels contrived and the facial expressions need some tweaking; they don't quite feel believable yet.

Ben Hatton:

Really nice. Shots are well planned, and really work to highlight the animation. Not sure if this is intentional or not, but when blinking the eyes aren't always together - looks a little weird to me. Just before spelling "b-o-d-y-s", maybe we should have had a more obvious visual cue as to why he's spelling it out?

James Fearn-Wannan:

You're animation is nice and smooth but I think it might be a little too exaggerated. All the characters move in basically the same way.. doesn't give me a great sense of personality.

David Shum:

This might be the model's fault, but the "S" shapes are weak. Most noticably on F140.

And the open mouth shape on frame 160 threw me off too. Made it look too busy.

Other than that, I love your piece! Good job on the secondary animation buddy!

Brian Bredehoeft:

Good Animation. Good timing, need more exageration, and little more creative theme. Not just genericaly reading lines.

Ben Harper:

OK overall, some nice sections in here.

daniel spikes:

Looks like you have a drop frame at 222

logu:

wow......nice smooth animation.