A.J. Black:

The actions in 115-160 with the gun is a little difficult to understand, is he pointing up with it or is he scratching his head with it? I like this portrayal of the lines better than any other so far.

Marco Palmieri:

pretty good. love the snappiness and the nice flow between poses. not bad

Nicholas Palmer Kelly:

maybe move one of the character around a bit...they seem pinned

Mayank:

Nice Work..But i think u should work on body..like hip r not moving much when center character is delivering dialogue..n need to work on expression also...cool

Sherif Nagib:

Good work, but you could've got a better establishing shot. More contrast could've been pulled in the first poses of the two old characters. But I still like it !

Willem-Jan L. van Rootselaar:

don't move all the characters the same time. you can't read all the actions at the same time. What is important in telling the story? Show that and let the rest follow.

Noah Arntson:

Very creative!

Jason Smith:

Very nice animation!!! Great staging, and nice timing, my only suggestion is watch that the secondary character doesn't act so much that its distracting.

Great job!

Nate Lane:

Awesome man. I really like it, especislly that last little gag where the body falls down and the guy gets all scared. This is also great because it's consistent with what he is saying. He's concerned about these bodys, and so he asks if they should do something with them, which shows he's a little uptight to begin with, and then this little scare at the end just seals the deal. Keep it up!

Avner Engel:

LOL hehehehehehehe

This is sweet!
Made me laugh

Mike Courtney:

nice work

Amanda Gil:

I love it!

Job vd Heuvell:

nice timing!
Maybe you could've varied the way the 2 left character are standing on their legs.
Also mabye give the head rotation inbetweens some more downwards rotation to get these nice arcs. Very nice animation overall :)

Andy Bewernick:

Very good, like the kid punching the buttons. The ending shot is great to.

Renato:

really cool, I think you maybe could adjust the timing a little

Ben Hatton:

This guys sure like to slouch - very funny. Maybe the guy in the middle has a stomach ache? Better staging would have made this much better.

Javier Vazquez:

Nice Animation! Good job.

Ashwani:

good

James Fearn-Wannan:

I think this is very good.

jonas bech:

the end is really fun

SamoRa G:

haha, gd idea... i like i like =D

Juan Calderon:

as with all your animation, some of the advice I would give is always develop you characters give them a back ground and develop their characteristic that should be model sheet you also might want to create a simple model sheet about his posture and his actions of movement. once you have established that you can be gin to create thumbnails and develop a story behind the lip sync and try to keep you character in line with what you want to project as you develop the thumb nails always keep in mind on creating Key poses and extreme poses that you can later on use for developing bigger sketches. then these sketches can be used to pose your character on the computer and that will help you start blocking your character. it's a lot of work but it helps to plan you scene and performance on paper before you go on to the computer

Santiago Montenegro:

Good idea

Erik Westlund:

Nice energy in the facial animation. Movements are mostly believable except for the first character is moving too quickly. More queues for direction could be created with the eyes. First character could look in the direction of the hand poking through the trap door instead of looking off to the side.

Ben Harper:

Really nice work!

Stephen:

I like the concept, maybe the fact that there are bodies above could be a little more obvious beforehand. Or not obvious at all until the one falls out of the ceiling. Also I'm not really sure what the kid is doing at the wall. If this is the floor buttons, I would think you would want them in a different position. It seems like the kid might be more specific with what he was playing with.

Andy Simpson:

good acting and timing