Falling Bodys

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Animator: Mark Stoughton

Description: The poor underdog spelling b-o-d-y-s really does know how to spell!

Experience: Self taught - a year or so

Time taken: scrapped 1st version 2 weeks - redone 2nd version 3 days

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Ken Rice:

very good effort - very floaty animation and strange poses though.
Keep it up.

Nate Lane:

Haha, cool man. I think that the characters look a bit stiff and floaty at the same time. Try to really push your poses, don't hold back. About the floaty nature, I would add some moving holds, which if you don't know, are held poses with very minimal movement. Anyways, keep going man!

Jason Smith:

Too floaty overall, watch the timing on the poses, play with the blocking stage first a nail your poses.

Eric Huelin:

Gag falls flat. Blue guy over acts looks menacing for no apparent reason.

Adam Giangregorio:

While it's good to have constant motion in characters to make them seem more alive, the slow flowing you have with these guys seems a bit unnatural. Their faces are a bit too stoic as well.

Mike Courtney:

floaty

Guneet:

Good concept, but the animation requires some more attention.

Ashwani:

keep it up

James Fearn-Wannan:

I'm finding the gestures a bit clunky and hard to interpret..

Janarthanan:

needs lot of improvement....

Santiago Montenegro:

good idea.. but I thinks tha animation needs a bit of breakdown

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