kemal kemal:

I think the only thing thats off, is how the yellow guy slides his weight back on to his left leg.

Erik Westlund:

Good use of color to help separate characters. Camera move is confusing the staging; blue character goes from right side of screen to left. Most of the movements a clear and have some weight but the poses are bit symmetrical for all three characters. Sliding foot on yellow character is a little distracting.

Dian Anggraini:

Interesting poses and characters. Good job. The scenes cutting were a bit awkward. First we have the blue guy at the right then suddenly he move to the left side. Since the character's face and mouths are small maybe you could try close up to emphasize the facial expression better.
At frame 288+, the yellow guy feels unnatural (normally people won't slip-move like that).

Ryan Chan:

The camera move feels like it's breaking the 180 rule and is a little disorienting. Also, the orange guy's foot drifts when he's shifting weight. I would shift weight to one side then quickly move the foot to the new position. Another thing is that this dialog clip has potential to show a great scene or story, and that was lacking here. Keep up the good work though!

Andrew:

foot slide on yellow guy looks odd

dheer chaudhary:

Animation looks too floaty

Nate Lane:

Cool man. One thing that I think seems a bit off is the pose with the yellow guy witht he wide spread legs. Im cool with that pose, it;s just that you have his leg dragging over towards his body very slowly while he is in that pose, which is impossible if his weight is centered as you have it (try doing it yourself). Other than that I think this is looking great man.

Jason Smith:

Watch the twinning on the blue guy. The orange guy slide looks weird.

Caryn:

Good work, but some weight issues. If the yellow guy is going to slide his foot across, his center of gravity needs to shift onto the foot that is not moving. So the torso needs to be over the left foot.

Ken Rice:

Good effort here - nice to see Mancandy in use. But the kid is still distracting and the yellow character's wide step in the middle of your animation just doesn't look right to me (if there's no obsticle why doesn't he just go straight to the blue character).

Mayank:

.nice ..u need to wore work on acting part...

Janarthanan:

Need lot of improvment..the brown guy sliding is so naked..shld have atleast adjusted that...

Mike Courtney:

the orange man's foot slides without the proper upper body movement, and the green one appears to be on a cycle

Andy Bewernick:

Great! You took our suggestions, the kids legs kicking was way less attention drawing. I also like the change in camera angles to see the kid. There was a small hicup, whent he moves in on the blue character his foot slides.

Brad Regier:

Good going here.
The kid's movement on the chair looks too labored, not like a casual leg swing.

zach rahman:

the drag of the leg looks weird and off. a lift of the leg could be better imo.

Amdbcg:

blue mancandy isn't moving for half the time, and its hard to see his facial features.
Also,what's the kid mandcandy doing? (having seizures?) If I were redoing it, I'd make the movements more realistic (eg: reference footage)
and I'd also light it a bit better

Michael Twentyman:

seems like you're acting for the stage instead of film. too much.

Sean Graham:

Whoa, these are some wacky characters! This feels like it's still in the early stages of development. I like some of the clarity in gesture in there.

James Fearn-Wannan:

I'm not totally sold on your acting choices..

Nathan Jent:

The cut doesn't work. You can't suddenly flip which side of the screen the characters are on. It confuses the eye and throws us off track.

Santiago Montenegro:

watch the foods it seems like floating"