Marco Palmieri:

poor camera choices. confusing!

Job vd Heuvell:

The kid pointing his finger is really nicely animated!
The pole vector animation of some of the arms is a little distracting though.

Freakbaba:

layout is confusing, the 3rd char suddenly appears, first char speaking anim very floaty, needs more hold to get the poses register. overall gud attempt but loads can be done still.

sharad kumar:

good..but the animation seems floaty!...see to it pls.

Mark Persson:

Very great idea!

But.... as you probably know yourself it needs some more work on it!

Keep up with the good work!D

dheer chaudhary:

very floaty need some work on poses and timeing

C. J. Cow:

creepy..

Noah Arntson:

The reflection thing was creative. It was rather confusing to me though with the angles, and having then cut to the 3rd character.

Nate Lane:

I really like the idea man. One thing that I think that you don't really need is the pose with the last guy where he points the hand. I don't really understand what this is trying to communicate. Anyways, other than that, you've done an awesome job :D.

Vanessa Blair:

Not quite sure what's going on. Are the reflections characters in his mind?

Your character's movements seem a little floaty- more breakdown keys might help

Eric Huelin:

Poses seem odd, where the kid stand in the second shot we should be able to see him in the first.

Prashant:

looking so much floaty ....

Ashwani:

good

Mike Courtney:

floaty

Amanda Gil:

Good composition and lighting! Beautiful scene! The animation is a little poor, but you have a good taste!

Peter Satera:

Not bad, but the scenario doesn't really work with what they do and say. The boy is a little over dramatic and the camera angles make it a bit hard to see the animation and time you put into your short.

Keep it up though!

Ben Hatton:

I think guy1 is practising his dance moves. If only we knew what the boy was pointing to, and where did he go in the last shot...

Sean Graham:

This one's really broad and floaty. Could use tightening up. Careful not to let the computer do too much for you.

Shannon:

This could use a lot of tightening up to keep the action from being so floaty.

Janarthanan:

Make a gud angle..tis is confusing..cldnt recognize who is aying wat...also..y one of the character is moving..he doesn have any holds..use appropriate holds..make good poses..first be clear in ur idea..good attempt..hoping for a better work nxt time..

James Fearn-Wannan:

Hmmmm the poses don't feel as defined as they could.

David Shum:

If you're animating with IK arms,
you have to watch out for popping, and making sure they don't drift, or lock down in place.

Also, your last shot is missing the other 2 characters!

Santiago Montenegro:

nice idea