B-O-D-Y-S

Final Rating: 3.15. Finished: 63 out of 72 entries.
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Animator: Ashwani

Description: Its my First animation in contest. I have tried to do good and also trying my best in future. I don't use full body shoot.

Experience: 1 year as a Student

Time taken: 8 Hrs. per day (20days)

Comments:

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Marco Palmieri:

need cleare poses and a cleare idea too.

Nate Lane:

awesome man. I really like it :). One thing that I think you could improve is to allow the character to have a little bit of lower body movement. YOu don't have to have them goin crazy, and walking all over the place, but I think some weight shifts here and there wouldn't hurt. Keep it up tho man! really nice job :D

Eric Huelin:

Hand gestures seem unnatural, the lip-sync is off.

Gill Frank:

Need stronger poses, its very floaty.

chakravarma:

not hitting the beats of animation.

Pablo Piccione:

It feels floaty...but good effot thoug

Mike Courtney:

the hips of the characters do not appear to move in the 3D space

deepak:

the end part doesnt look as much as good than the beginning . heads looks jerky in the end

Ashwani:

i have to more and more practice.

James Fearn-Wannan:

The movement feels a bit too exaggerated to me.. like there isn't much intent behind what they're doing.

Janarthanan:

make ur idea clear...and keeep good poses..none of ur pose seems interesting..and tha axns are looking non stop..continuously movin..give holds..
Improve timing...

Paul Naas:

Whoo - MAJOR breaking of the 180-degree rule. I had to watch this twice because I had no idea where the kid came from. I thought he'd just materialized before I realized that the camera had gone way past 180.

Santiago Montenegro:

good job!