B-O-D-Y-S
Comments:
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Marco Palmieri:
need cleare poses and a cleare idea too.
Nate Lane:
awesome man. I really like it :). One thing that I think you could improve is to allow the character to have a little bit of lower body movement. YOu don't have to have them goin crazy, and walking all over the place, but I think some weight shifts here and there wouldn't hurt. Keep it up tho man! really nice job :D
Eric Huelin:
Hand gestures seem unnatural, the lip-sync is off.
Gill Frank:
Need stronger poses, its very floaty.
chakravarma:
not hitting the beats of animation.
Pablo Piccione:
It feels floaty...but good effot thoug
Mike Courtney:
the hips of the characters do not appear to move in the 3D space
deepak:
the end part doesnt look as much as good than the beginning . heads looks jerky in the end
Ashwani:
i have to more and more practice.
James Fearn-Wannan:
The movement feels a bit too exaggerated to me.. like there isn't much intent behind what they're doing.
Janarthanan:
make ur idea clear...and keeep good poses..none of ur pose seems interesting..and tha axns are looking non stop..continuously movin..give holds..
Improve timing...
Paul Naas:
Whoo - MAJOR breaking of the 180-degree rule. I had to watch this twice because I had no idea where the kid came from. I thought he'd just materialized before I realized that the camera had gone way past 180.
Santiago Montenegro:
good job!









Animator: Ashwani
Description: Its my First animation in contest. I have tried to do good and also trying my best in future. I don't use full body shoot.
Experience: 1 year as a Student
Time taken: 8 Hrs. per day (20days)