Marco Palmieri:

animation is good. some of the timing on your actions seems off.

Erik Westlund:

Nice concept theme to play off audio. Staging puts boy in a good place to hear without appearing to hear at first. Good bit of business for all three. Nice hand-off of knife. Poses of middle character could have been pushed a lot more; especially as he finishes his question and then reacts to boy's correction.

sharad kumar:

thats good stuff!..i like it.

Ken Rice:

Nice setup - seems a little under animated to me though - also bit difficult to know where to look.

Mark Stoughton:

Excellent. One suggestion: The pirate with the eye patch should look at the fat pirate when he asks about the spelling.

Noah Arntson:

Very creative and engaging!

Nate Lane:

Cool man it looks great! One thing that I think you could do is push those poses just a nit further. what you have is really awesome, but I would try to exaggerate a few of those poses, just to add some nice texture, something that's a little different. Just a thought :). Keep it up tho man! You defenitely have a lot of nice subtle stuff in there.Keep it up for sure :D

Jason Smith:

Great staging, and nice job moving my eye around to follow the dialog! Very very nice.

vivek:

nise idea its look good folks

Eric Huelin:

Interesting group, concept is clear, good acting.

Sumit:

I think that main character should need to show some more acting to clear the intention. He should need to look at least ones towards the bodies.

All over it's a really good work.

Mayank:

Great job u have done..all the best

Mike Courtney:

think about the character's though processes to improve the acting

Amanda Gil:

the child is awesome!

Andy Bewernick:

Very good

Brad Regier:

Nice job.
I'd like to see a second camera angle. Maybe get Fatty & Skinny together in a MCU for when Skinny responds?

Arief Leuvenardi:

I love the poses. Good job.

Guillaume Roux:

Good idea and nice animation overall. Really good work on the kid .

Ben Hatton:

The animation on the guy in the middle is great, nice character design on him too. I guess you ran out of time for the others. Overall, I think this could have shone with some (more) time spent in staging/shot planning.

Ashwani:

good

James Fearn-Wannan:

Great! Everything flows nicely and has a real purpose behind it .. fits together like a dream !

Juan Carlos Valdez:

great job!

Adam Green:

Hey, this is nice. Good job all around

ArunVijayan:

good smooth animation......character in the frame right is wobbling when he is saying bodies........

Santiago Montenegro:

Good acting.. very nice

Ben Harper:

Theres some nice animation here. I particularly like the guy trying to open the treasure box as he says "bodies". The way you drop his shoulders and lift his head, really accent the word.