Protective Dad
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Santiago Montenegro:
good animation but a little boring
Amy:
Good keeping the kid's eyes on the game, even though his head turns and leans toward the first speaker.
Marco Palmieri:
great animation. not sure where the bodies are, is it the fish? Love the kids reaction. The second guys reaction is a bit over acted. He could be looking over a bit sooner just with his eyes, and then look with the head. You got my vote though. Well done.
Ryan Chan:
the animation is great! love the scene and the characters. I think one thing you can add from here is a little rock in the boat with a little bit of secondary action in the characters to make it stand out. looks awesome though!
dheer chaudhary:
Nice poses and animation.
Guneet:
Good job. especially with the kid.
Mark Stoughton:
Nice subtle acting. I love the kid never taking his eyes off of the Nintendo!
Andrew:
i love the way the boy can't even be bothered to look up from his game when he spells "bodies". funny stuff
Vanessa Blair:
Great! I love the way you animated the kid.
Nate Lane:
Really awesome man. I'm loving it :D. Keep it up!
Jason Smith:
Great secondary action going on with the kid! Nice job overall!
Eric Huelin:
Could have his hand closer to his mouth while spelling.
Nomercy:
I liked the last part ,when the kid spells bodies...
Brad Silby:
I like the kid in this, the way he's concentrated on the cards but still listening in is cool. The guy on the right is nice and understated, but I think the guy on the left is a bit overplayed, his action on BODYS is a bit to much in my opinion. Nice work though.
Nicolas Fourcroy:
Hi !
Excellent Lipsynch
Janarthanan:
GOod work...
Mike Courtney:
nice work
Shannon:
Lots of nice, understated work here. Your acting choices match the dialogue well.
Amanda Gil:
Great acting and lipsync! Maybe the first shot is too general , you could have approached to the first guy while he's saying his line or something like that.
Nicholas Palmer Kelly:
maybe add a bit more emotion in your poses...it's down played too much...almost boring....everything's well animated though...
Brad Regier:
Best yet. Nice 'n' simple 'n' subtle.
Ace:
Nice lipsync :)
Ben Hatton:
Lots of fish, but no fishing - very suspicious! Delivery of line 3 is excellent.
Sean Graham:
I think this is really good, it just doesn't feel as polished as some of the others.
Ashwani:
very good wrk man
James Fearn-Wannan:
It's nice. It's coherent.
Christopher Salamat:
nice subtle animation
Juan Carlos Valdez:
good
Chelsea Hiatt Farley:
Great eye movement on the kid - looking up, but still not looking away from his game. And I like the proud look the guy in the hat has towards the kid.
SamoRa G:
gd lip sync
Lindsay Thompson:
You have some nice stuff here. Lots of subtlety. My only comment would be it's a little bit floaty in spots, but very nice. Nice job on the lipsync.
Emmanuel:
When the kid talks, he should at least look at the person once.
venkatesh:
nice taking character poses and animation and princeples and finishing touch have very very fine (with chaild charactr) characters experations and so many total have a very looking and nice animation
Emmanuel Vergne:
Really cool
I just would have the left character stay in the pose he is in frame 130 till the end : he tries to keep the conversation private, so that the kid couldn't listen
The kid at the end is great
Stephen:
Seems like there are a lot of animations with boats and water. Nice use of camera in this. Good definite characters. I'm guessing the "bodies" the character is talking about are the fish bodies? I'm thinking that could be clearer.









Animator: Martin Kirkhaug
Description: Had tons of fun doing this.
Crit away, please.
Experience: 8 months as professional
Time taken: 4 weekends