Marco Palmieri:

poses are not clear enough. shakey!

Nicholas Palmer Kelly:

lip sync needs work

Joan Delmont:

The gag at the end doesn't work...

sharad kumar:

good concept...but i think u need 2 smoothout the characters a bit. keep it up.

Caryn:

A lot of irrelevant movement of the hands.

Ken Rice:

Pretty nice animation but I think your lip sync lets you down a lot.

Noah Arntson:

That should've cut his fingers. Great expressive responses but too abrubt.

Nate Lane:

haha very good man. Love how the yellow dude tries to cover up the bodies in the trunk. Very nice :). One thing that I think you could tweak is lip syncing, especially for the first guy. When he says "we should do" you have his mouth closed for the most part, and I think you should definitely be showing a mouth gesture for "think", seeing that the dialog has it as one of the more pronounced words. I don't know, just a thought :). Keep up the awesome work man! Well done :D

Eric Huelin:

Hits: Good premise, fun twist a the end.

Misses: Over acting from the yellow guy.

Janarthanan:

Good work..nice idea...cold have concentrated on lip sync..

Brad Silby:

Nice 'cover up' action at the end. I think it would be improved with a close up or two.

Mayank:

i think u should work on body part more.

Prashant:

lips sync need works...

Mike Courtney:

the boy's walk needs some work

Ben Hatton:

I was waiting the whole clip for the guy to get his fingers in the trunk, made it a bit more interesting, but maybe you could have made a bit more of it.

James Fearn-Wannan:

I like this. It seems quite plausible. My one issue, though, is that the yellow guy's acting seems a lot more exaggerated than the other two. Makes things seem a little inconsistent.

Harry G:

alot needed. The timing and posing wan't very impressive and last bit with the other character getting his fingers didn'y really fit in.