Bodies
Comments:
(Commenting only available during the rating period)
Andrew:
i like the anticipation in the first character that speaks. might have been funny if the kid pulled up a leg or something just for like a punchline. i like it overall though
Joan Delmont:
Be careful of the spine of the middle character, move all controller, not just the up, it's break his body...
Anirudh:
nice stuff...all 3 characters are handled very nicely and as per their audio. weight shift of first char speaking can be done with more work. at 216 the 2nd char pose looks quite broken and odd. overall nice effort.
sharad kumar:
good work ther!...but for the sitting guy why did u bend the body near the chest part!!!!!!!!!!!..thats lookin awkward.
jaweed:
the second characters eye direction is wrong, the person is behind him..
Ken Rice:
nice setup - you could get a little closer in on the action I think. On first viewing It was unclear what character said the first line
JAEHYUN PARK:
Cool!!!
Nate Lane:
awesome man! looks great :D. One thing that I think could be tweaked is the timing of the lip syncing, especially for the second guy who talks. It seems that his mouth is still moving even when the track doesn't have him saying anything. Just tweak it a bit so that his mouth shapes happen a couple of frames before the audio, and you'll be golden :) Keep it up!
Eric Huelin:
Hits: The two on the left are well acted.
Misses: Hard to make out what the guy on the right is doing. He's also over acting. A tighter shot would have worked better.
Mayank:
.u need to work on body part..
venkatesh:
so fine starting standing walkin have a very different very fine totla timing and action fine and chaild character leges moving very natuarally .very fine
Ashwani:
good work
Mike Courtney:
nice work
Gregory Naud:
Some poses are completly distorded watch out for that. Otherwise composition is cool.
Ben Hatton:
Guy1 in the back walks like a penguin! Head movements of guy2 don't match his dialog.
James Fearn-Wannan:
I don't entirely understand what's going on here.
Janarthanan:
good idea...try to improve...give gud settles...cushions at appropriate places..and also give moving hols..tha mid char looks dead for a while..chk tht..









Animator: pramod.desaneni
Description: This is my second entry to the 11second club. The dialogue was very challenging since it involved 3 voices . This is the first time i am trying with 3 characters .
Experience: 4
Time taken: 6 days part time