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Animator: Aparna Varma

Description: ok so i started this on purely experimental basis...i got bored of doin walk cycles : )...!
altho m not satisfied with my work..i enjoyed every bit of it...

hit me with the CRITICISM! : D

Experience: nil...

Time taken: 2.5 weeks

Comments:

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RaJeSh_ToR:

need more acting........!??!

Mayank:

cool..i like expression..its nice but still u have to work more..on body part..on hand like finger is poping ..keep it up..all the best

sharad kumar:

good work!...u can improve a lot.The only thing i wud like to add is to take care of the floaty feeling....it happens to everybody in 3d.Carefully try to eliminate that next time onwards!..keep working hard.

Kay Ma'Ani:

I love the way the character in the red turns his head exsessively but plenty of room for improvement......great work though

Bill Zebleckis:

haha...get full version of your program!

JAEHYUN PARK:

Nice work!!! just need lipsync for the first guy!!!

Nate Lane:

Awesome man. Looks great! I think that you could really soften up the poses a bit tho. Really go for a little more looseness, organic I guess. You can do this by just overshooting poses, getting nice arcs, and instead of going from pose A to pose B, go from pose A to pose C to pose B. Just a thought :) Keep it up!

Jason Smith:

Very nice job! I loved the secondary action you added on the orange. Lip sync was a little off at times, mostly looked on.

Eric Huelin:

Lip-sync is there just the mouth is a little too hyper and it isn't showing the same as what it is saying.

chakravarma:

orange guy movements are little bit floaty.i like little guy animation.

Ashwani:

nice work man

Mike Courtney:

noticed some pops

Amanda Gil:

It looks like they move the parts of their bodies separatedly. Try to move the hips a little more and make the rest of the body follow the impulse, you know? like a tail.

Amdbcg:

good work :)

Ben Hatton:

Execution is a bit too obvious. The idea of the angel is promising.

James Fearn-Wannan:

This is alright. Feels a bit jerky or twitchy at times, though.

Juan Carlos Valdez:

The animation is a little floaty.

RJ:

The kid's extreme is off by a couple frames.

SamoRa G:

pops a bit at places..

Nathan Jent:

I like the what you've done with the acting. However, I think it would really add some life if you put a little motion in the hips and lower body.

Santiago Montenegro:

I think the animation needs a bit of overlap.. for me looks a bit robotic

Janarthanan:

Seems to be good idea..but improve tha animation..most of their hips are static and give delays in turning and moving..

Ben Harper:

the animation is a bit jumpy and needs a bit of work to make the transition between Keys a lot more fluid.

Santiago Arellano:

I'm all for the animation style, but some of the reactions are happening were they shouldn't be, there's jolts in the eyebrows that jump into view when you're watching the kid.

It needs more polish, but good stuff

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