Cereal Aisle

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Animator: Shannon

Description: Just a regular afternoon at the grocery store

Experience: 3 years professionally

Time taken: 20 hours

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A.J. Black:

You have some good facial features and details in head movement. The kid is great, just playing with his toys minding his own business until he says his lines. The setup isn't prone to talking about bodies in a supermarket, but I guess that is their place to talk about their dastardly deed. Good luck.

Ryan Chan:

the animation is looking great! I think the kid could be pushed a little more and still not be too distracting... like more facial stuff as if he was making sound effects with his mouth. And also when the kid's head comes up to speak, i think it's moving too fast or could be a tad more subtle. That's a small thing though. Oh another small thing i noticed is i think there's intersecting geometry with the hand of the guy on the left and the basket.

Ken Rice:

I like the kid playing - some nice subtle animation.

dheer chaudhary:

Good stuff

Kay Ma'Ani:

good effort but no sense of scene

Nate Lane:

haha that kid is awesome. Love what you've done with him. Really well done as a whole as well. Woooo!

Andrew:

very nice

Vanessa Blair:

I love the second guy's reaction to the first guy! Great job

Janarthanan:

Good work..luv the kids axns..cool attitude..
The first guy while stretchin to the self..there the hip looks shaky..i cld understand u have laged tht...but i feel iit shld have workd a bit better..

Other than tht good workk

Mike Courtney:

nice work

Peter Satera:

I really like the second motion of the guys shopping. However the boy could react a little more to the fact he had to spelt it out for the adult. Nice try.

Andy Bewernick:

Very good, the kid playing with the toy is excellent. Enjoyable to watch, like the poses as well.

Brad Regier:

Pretty nice acting. Maybe show a little more that the kid is listening?

deepak:

everything looks great and perfect ot me

James Fearn-Wannan:

Seems fair.

Juan Carlos Valdez:

very good. my one comment is to keep in mind that the viewer will look at what you want them to look at so if you want the viewers eye to go from one character to another, do not have the first character move so much after he is done speaking. It distracts from the others

Chelsea Hiatt Farley:

I love the kid playing with the dinosaurs!

RaJeSh_ToR:

good ani............!??!

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