Marco Palmieri:

Pretty good 2D. seems like it needs some refining and the layout isn't clear enough. maybe more defined lines would help it.

Dian Anggraini:

Cute characters, I especially like the little one, he's very adorable. Good job!

One thing though, at frame 81 I think it's better to have the guy looking up rather than looking at the other character. Right now, rather than thinking he looks like he's afraid to say the word.
I gues it's not finished yet? Because except for the little guy, the others went to blocking state when they're not in the spotlight. I would like to see this finished. Good job once again.

Nicholas Palmer Kelly:

cool........just some clean up in the breakdowns and in-betweens and this will really be a good piece...

Joan Delmont:

cool !

sharad kumar:

good work..i wish if u had just finished it..

Mark Persson:

Great idea!
i like all the basic trawings... i like the lipsync and most of the character movement. But... as you probably know it needs more work on it!

Keep up with the good work!D

Ken Rice:

nice animation - but sorry I don't get the logic of the scene: there's worry about saying the word 'bodies' yet the kid is eating one.

Noah Arntson:

(Fr . 84 to 101) the young munching animal's back and hair overlap made this funny, why did you stop midway through?

Jarrod Anderson:

I -love- the character on the far right delivering his lines - it's a great use of expression, and reads very very well. Kudos on the 2D animation, too. My only critique is when the kid pops up, Lefty is shocked that he's there, so it may have been worth having the kid look at both then characters then drop down to suggest that what he's seeing is new too.

Nate Lane:

Awesome man. I'm really liking it. High five! hehe. congrats :)

logu:

I like this this concept and animation... really good.

Caryn:

Nice work. I would punch out the emphasis on that "S" (125-140) even further.

Eric Huelin:

Hits: Nice casual movements from left character.
Misses: character becoming still, lacking tweening, left guy mouth looks wrong when saying the "S" Don't see a reason to spell. Difficult to know where to look.

Mayank:

great..keep it up :)

Prashant:

Good work....Acting is really nice....

Brad Silby:

Nice acting, if you polish this a bit it would be really nice.

Nomercy:

nice work ,but you should have finished it,,first character's actions are really nice..

Ashwani:

good work

Mike Courtney:

the character on the right needs another pass

Amanda Gil:

good choices for acting. It needs more inbetweens

Ismael Ontiveros:

why you block the animation of the character 2 ( the one on the right )?, maybe some smooth animation will be awsome!!

Ben Hatton:

I Really like the spelling of "bodies" at the end. The chin scratch in line 1 is cool, but could have been a bit stronger. Character for line 2 has a lot of promise, I guess you ran short of time to flesh him out fully. Overall, great job.

James Fearn-Wannan:

Nicely done.

Christopher Salamat:

nice 2d. i just if the line quality was a little cleaner the animation would stand out a little better. great job though.

SamoRa G:

i like this... =D

David Shum:

cute kitty :P

Juan Calderon:

try to make time to finish some characters, I know 2D Animation is very hard work time consuming, I think this piece looks great though I just have trouble on how some character aren't. moving after they finish their dialogged they seem not alive maybe add some Eye blinks. but you have a good 2d animation style. I like the character and the kid when he delivers his dialogue, I love his follow through as well as the others. I love your establishing shot and the character development, keep at it your on the right track on becoming a great 2D animator

as with all your animation, some of the advice I would give is always develop you characters give them a back ground and develop their characteristic that should be model sheet you also might want to create a simple model sheet about his posture and his actions of movement. once you have established that you can be gin to create thumbnails and develop a story behind the lip sync and try to keep you character in line with what you want to project as you develop the thumb nails always keep in mind on creating Key poses and extreme poses that you can later on use for developing bigger sketches. then these sketches can be used to pose your character on the computer and that will help you start blocking your character. it's a lot of work but it helps to plan you scene and

venkatesh:

nice 2d effective and he have to learn main poses so fine

Ben Harper:

Nice work overall. I love the middle guy chompin' on the food, it's a cool idea. I think you could push the expressions a bit more to extenuate the words though.

RaJeSh_ToR:

nice animation...........!??!

Andy Simpson:

nice to see some traditional animation.. good timing and volume control

Santiago Arellano:

Could be a little more polished, but the motion and acting is clear, the only thing I didn't liked was the character on screen right, his action was a little cliche going back while shaking head and then gesture and accent forward.