Marco Palmieri:

some really nicely animated bits. the overall idea doesn't quite come through. Not sure what they're doing though.
But i love the driving action he does. good job. top 5 for me.

Amy:

The first guy looks strangely like Woody or Buzz Lightyear when his mouth rolls to the side and his one eyebrow screws upward.

Erik Westlund:

I don't quite get the bodies joke... I mean I do, but I had to make sure with several views that was supposed to be the joke. Runner lacks weight. Performance wise you have a nice finish on the boy rubbing his eye and leaning back. Shoulders (clavicles) should push up when leads into them.

Dian Anggraini:

Wah, very nice twist.

I like the facial expression of the first guy. For the girl, maybe you could make her run more feminine-like (more movement on the hips)
At frame 260, he looks like he didn't have left hand, careful.
Good job!

Emmanuel:

The guy running doesn't feel like he's power walking. he guys on the third shot disappears. It would be nice if we could see a bit of his legs or something.

Joan Delmont:

Good ! Just the walk of the purple character is very strange...

Ryan Chan:

The animation is looking great, but i feel like the dialog doesn't fit too well with the story you're telling... or maybe i just don't get it =T

Guneet:

The animation was good.. the camera work was a bit snappy though. I had to play it thrice to make some sense out of it.. but maybe thats just me :P

Freakbaba:

layout confusing, hook up not matching. first char speakin shud be looking towards the guy under the car and not towards the kid sitting. last cam cut, the first guy shud be standing behind the kid logically for hook up issues. gesture of first char from 63-95 looks confusing and out of context. overall good effort,

dheer chaudhary:

looks good but I am a little confused that what bodies are they talking about

Nate Lane:

haha awesome man. I really love the kid at the end with the eye rub. Awesome :D. The only thign that I think is kinda confusing is the driving gesture the guy makes. It's just not clear to me what he's trying to communicate. Other than that, you've done an amazing job! Keep it up!

Andrew:

nice work

Jason Smith:

Nice work! Great staging and overall very good timing and great poses. The only thing that I didn't get is the dude running at the beginning of the piece... was that a zombie or what?? Great lip sync,.

Janarthanan:

good work..but dialogue doesn seem to match the axns..

Gill Frank:

nice lipsync.:)
Didnt need to a 4th charater running across the Screen, toke the fokes out of the 1st guy action.

Ken Rice:

pretty good animation here - sorry I didn't inderstand the driving gesture from the main character.

Eric Huelin:

Spelling guy disappears suddenly at the last scene. The pink guy walk cycle is strange.

Ashwani:

awosome man great work

Mike Courtney:

the pink character needs work, she looks like a cross between a walk and a jog and brings the rest of the animation down

Amanda Gil:

Good animation!

Andy Bewernick:

Liked it a lot.

Claudia:

nice job with the lib synch

Amdbcg:

I love the faces on those characters!
great work on the expressions!

Ben Hatton:

I like the animation on the last line.

James Fearn-Wannan:

I think that's very good !

Michael Krieter:

I really like what you did here!

Juan Carlos Valdez:

not bad

SamoRa G:

i like this wun!

NeilB:

I'm guessing the purple runner is a pretty girl, and the first sentence changed direction midway, based on the pantomime and the leer. The expressions of the leer have a good toony float to them, a little intoxicated. The floatiness doesn't work as well on the other two faces. The slouch needs a touch more anticipation. Seeking eye contact with a character he can't see is a little strange. This is good work.

David Shum:

Nice work on the kid!!

venkatesh:

some mutch fine expression nice and jaw movement and facial exprations fine

Taber Dunipace:

LOVE that lipsync.